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PostSubject: Havoc's Techniques   Tue Jul 23, 2013 7:23 am


Name: Doton: Advanced Earth Spear
Canon/Custom: Based off of Canon.
Element: Earth
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Jutsu Prerequisites: Placing two open palms on the ground.
Description: The user flows chakra through all parts of their body causing it to become noticeably darker, which increases their defensive power to its utmost limits by making the skin as hard as diamond. Furthermore, the destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great all-purpose technique. The amount of techniques that can break through the areas hardened by the Earth Spear are close to zero, excluding its undeniable weak point: Lightning Release ninjutsu. This jutsu increases the user's durability to an extreme point of at this point being completely immune to any physical damage from techniques of B-Rank and below and a 50% resistance for everything that is A-Ranked and above except for lightning, and increasing the user's strength by a complete rank. As an advanced version, this jutsu not only allows the increased durability of the skin, but every part of the user's body including bones, organs, etc. The user since using Doton chakra all around their body they are much more prone to lightning damage making them weaker to it by 50% in this state.


I would like to use one of my starting tokens on this technique.


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PostSubject: Re: Havoc's Techniques   Tue Jul 23, 2013 11:36 pm

  • Diamond is a kekkei tota, so diamond-level hardness wouldn't be a doton technique.
  • A jutsu having a substantial resistance to its weakness doesn't sit right with me.
  • Overall seems overpowered.

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PostSubject: Re: Havoc's Techniques   Tue Jul 23, 2013 11:46 pm

It doesn't literally turn my skin to diamond, that is just an example the wikia used for the original. The whole first part is from the original. I removed the resistance to it's weakness and made it weaker against lighting than a normal body would.
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PostSubject: Re: Havoc's Techniques   Thu Jul 25, 2013 12:19 am

the earth spear jutsu is canon which is fine but anything that is custom can not copy a KKT or whatever.

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PostSubject: Re: Havoc's Techniques   Mon Jul 29, 2013 12:13 am

KKT? If you mean KKG, I'd like to mention that Earth Spear is not one.
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PostSubject: Re: Havoc's Techniques   Mon Jul 29, 2013 1:36 am

Kekkei Tota, check the advanced elements.

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PostSubject: Re: Havoc's Techniques   Mon Jul 29, 2013 1:38 am

Well, it doesn't copy another KKT either, it simply uses 'diamond' (a hard substance) as a description word for the solidity of the persons body. I'm assuming this is a reference to natural diamond, not chakra created advanced element diamond which can be made much harder than natural diamond due to the infusion of chakra.
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PostSubject: Re: Havoc's Techniques   Mon Jul 29, 2013 1:39 am

Blatant loophole abuse, I won't let you try to weasel around the rules.

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PostSubject: Re: Havoc's Techniques   Mon Jul 29, 2013 1:49 am

That is a false accusation, I'm requesting to speak to another moderator about this.
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