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Village : Umigakure
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PostSubject: Auron Nakamura   Thu Aug 08, 2013 4:39 am


Auron Nakamura



Hmph. Seems I'm lost again.

Theme Song
Red Stars by The Birthday Massacre



Basic Information
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Nicknames: Majora
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Blood Type: O-
Village: Umigakure
Village Rank: ANBU Member
Skill Rank: A-Rank



Physical Information
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Auron is a somewhat lanky person with a tall stature and muscled physique. He is usually seen wearing his trademark red ANBU jacket and a black undershirt. He has a few bandages covering several spots on his body, some for decoration and some to cover up healing scars. He typically wears a gas mask on his face to hide his identity instead of the traditional ANBU masks.

His eyes are a maroon color, though his left eye is covered by his mask and can sometimes appear to be cyan through the lense. He always is seen wearing black gloves on both of his hands over the bandages tied around the palms of his hands. He wears a pants made from a black fabric with a bag sewn into the right side where he keeps his ninja tool scrolls. He has two criss-crossing belts that overlap around his waist and shady black boots.

Height: 6"2
Weight: 152 lbs
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Personality Information
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Auron has a very calm and focused demeanor, constantly remaining composed and level-headed in all situations. The mask he wears along with his ANBU rank gives him an air of mystery around others he deals with, particularly when around civilians and some of the ordinary shopkeepers in Umigakure.

He is somewhat calculating and perceptive. Auron has never been  one to anger and even on difficult and physically taxing missions is usually seen quietly analyzing the foes and obstacles he faces. He is very attentive to his surroundings and is able to make use of the landscape to his advantage in battle, either to provide obstacles for his enemies or amplify the power of his jutsu.

Unlike some ANBU ninja, Auron puts less stock in rules, regulations, and orders, but not enough that he disregards them. Despite ANBU customs, Auron sometimes takes off his mask instead of constantly hiding his identity from others, though he keeps his ninja life separate and he tries to keep a low profile. He is more apathetic towards the rules set by the village rather than other ninja who consider them absolute principles, regardless of how they are phrased or seeming followed to the letter. He will still listen to his superiors, but play loose with the execution or omit parts of it for his own benefit.

He enjoys having the freedom to do as he pleases and dislikes the authority of others, but does respect those he himself is willing to acknowledge. He seeks power in order to fulfill his late mother's wish to free Aranogakure from the disease and corruption that plagues it so the Senzo clan can return. He also expresses some fascination with the abilities of others that he meets.

He does possess loyalty to his village and does not hold those who have betrayed it in a favorable light. He can be somewhat philosophical and honest to his allies and enemies when he is in the mood, possessing a degree of empathy towards their goals and motives.

Auron has a small case of wanderlust, a desire to not be holed up in a single area and a need to explore places, even if its just a random hole in the middle of nowhere. It is a case that remained most prevalent in his childhood, but has since come under control in his adulthood. He still has a desire to experience new (and sometimes odd) places, but it is no longer a physical impulse and he now has more control over himself.

He has a rather mischievous and playful side, sometimes finding creative ways to put others in embarrassing or compromising situations, a habit stretching back to his childhood. He also enjoys playing with the children around Umigakure, often seen engaged in a game of tag on his days off from ANBU duties. He also has a fondness for cats as he rarely finds them around Umigakure.

He switches regularly between his usual relaxed neutral posture and a battle ready stance with his arms and legs flexed for combat.

    Sexuality: Unknown
    Likes:

    • Power
    • Freedom & Exploration
    • Knowledge
    • Playing Tag
    • Cats

    Dislikes:

    • Rogue Ninja
    • Vegetables
    • Hospitals




Combat Information
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The Senzo Clan-------------------------

The Senzo Clan

The Senzo Clan was born from a small band of outcasts that were exiled from their respective villages and settled in the farthest regions of the land between lands. For a time, their existence was obscure, until they were approached by an envoy from Aranogakure who offered them a place among its growing empire that the Senzo immediately accepted.

For a long time, there was peace within the Senzo clan, who grew in strength and number throughout the village. When the disease that wiped out Arano struck, only a small number of the Senzo were able to escape.

They have the potential to possess a rare bloodline called Heat Control, or Heat Release, that allows them to manipulate the heat energy from molecules in their environment. This was the source of the Senzo clan's ability to withstand freezing cold winters and dry summers unhindered.



Fighting Style-------------------------

Auron's fighting style is heavily reliant on his Hydrification Technique and his proficiency in both ninjutsu and taijutsu. His Hydrification Technique allows him to turn his body into a protein-based liquid at will to evade harm, infiltrate buildings, and modify his body parts to suit the situation. This makes him particularly difficult to strike as he can reconstitute his body from liquid whenever he is injured as well as use it to bypass an enemy's defenses. He must also keep

He is able to use both Water Release and Earth Release, allowing him to create tidal forces by creating water and seismic forces through manipulating the earth.

He also has a large amount of skill in Taijutsu and high physical strength. His style employs heavy usage of kicks, but not exclusively.

Auron is also in possession of the Hozuki clan's Hydrification Technique, allowing him to turn his body into a protein-based liquid at will to evade harm, infiltrate buildings, and modify his body parts to suit the situation.


Ninja Specializations-------------------------

Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Taijutsu


Elemental Specialization-------------------------

Water Release

    Water Release is one of the basic elemental nature transformation techniques that allow the user to manipulate pre-existing water, or create their own, by turning their chakra into water. It takes much more ability to create the water outside the body than to manipulate what is already available or expel it from their mouths. One of the most versatile of the five basic chakra natures, Water Release techniques can not only change shape but state as well. Moreover, the water becomes more solid in the process as well. Offensive water techniques seem to inflict harm from the sudden force that they exert, which would cause massive internal damage to a human.

Earth Release

    Earth Release is one of the basic elemental nature transformation techniques and allows the user to manipulate the surrounding earth for offensive and defensive purposes or create it; be it dirt, mud, or rock.
    Earth Release techniques have the ability to change the strength and composition of the earth from being as hard as metal to as soft as clay, as well as manipulating their density, making them heavier or lighter. This includes allowing the user to travel through ground and rock in various ways which can be essential for both transportation and for setting up attacks or creating defences or for offence. Indeed, this makes earth techniques one of the most versatile of the elemental techniques. Pre-existing earth is not necessary though, for the user can create it with their own chakra.



Physical Characteristics-------------------------

Strengths

Physical Prowess
Auron possesses great physical power in both his arms and legs, having a 25% boost to the damage caused by his punches and kicks.

Hydration
Auron is able to limit the amount of water he uses, how much his body expends, and increase the limit of water is body can hold. This allows him to greatly extend his usage of the Hozuki Clan's Hydration Technique and go extremely long periods of time without a need for constant hydration.

Large Chakra Pool
Auron possesses 27% larger reserves of modestly strong chakra that allow him to use a multitude of mid-level techniques with a slight reduction in the drain on his stores.

Weaknesses

Lightning Release «30%»
With his Hydrification Technique, Auron is extremely vulnerable to Lightning Release techniques and suffers 30% more damage from from them and allow them to easily pin him down.

Liquid Body & Dehydration
As his body is made of liquid, Auron is more vulnerable to losing moisture and becoming dehydrated in arid areas, particularly when in places where water is scarce and the air is dry. In drought areas, Auron expends more liquid and can lose liquid regularly.

When in a liquid state, Auron is confined to his volume and can be captured and locked up in airtight containers. His liquid body can also be 'absorbed' into absorbent substances, such as sponges. Sand is especially effective in completely absorbing the liquid, being the hardest to escape from.

Sealing Jutsu
Auron has no aptitude for Fuinjutsu, being baffled by the complex formulas, sub-formulas, and overlays that come with the specialty. He is limited in his knowledge to D-Rank Sealing Jutsu used for small weapons.


Special Powers-------------------------

Taijutsu
Type: Fighting Style
Description: While not specialized in it, Auron has invented his own Taijutsu style to complement his ninjutsu prowess. While not original as it borrows heavily from other techniques, Auron's style uses kicks heavily and techniques enhanced with his Earth and Water Releases to create effective combos.

Hydrification Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Element: Water
Type: Hiden Ninjutsu
Description: This technique is a protean, whole-body technique whereby the user liquefies their entire body at will. It essentially makes it nearly impossible to receive damage from physical attacks. From a single hair, to the skin and muscles, everything can be liquefied and solidified at will. Be it to evade an enemy's attack during a short range battle, to infiltrate a structure, or to launch a surprise attack in a liquefied state, this technique boasts a high strategic value. Applying this technique, the user can also modify their body parts for suitable situations.

Boasting high strategic value, the only way to contain a user of this technique is to lock them up in an airtight container so they cannot move about. When the user passes out, they turn into a jelly-like state. Since this technique turns the body into water, the Hōzuki are extremely vulnerable to Lightning Release techniques, taking 30% more damage from them.


INVENTORY

Majora's Mask-------------------------


Majora's Mask
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Description: Unlike typical ANBU, Auron wears a black gas mask that also covers his left eye in a cyan-colored frame. While not a unique piece of equipment, it is able to mask a sensitive portion of his chakra signature, making it easier for him to slip by unaware sensor-type ninja and reduces the amount of chakra he uses in his techniques. It also has a small amount of water concealed in an inside pocket in case Auron needs to increase his reserves.
Origin: The gas mask wasn't too special of an artifact when Auron first found it. It was in his father's arsenal as a means to circumvent airborne toxins, but the look of it displeased his father. Auron however liked it and asked for it as a child after he was first promoted to Genin. The mask alienated him somewhat, but it became a part of his identity as a ninja..


Simple Equipment
• Kunai (x4)
• Shuriken (x20)
• Weapon-Sealing Scrolls (x2)

TECHNIQUES

Taijutsu

Serenade Fang
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Range: Short-Mid Range
Description: Auron lunges at his target and spins his body around wildly at a ferocious speed. When contact is made with the target, he can deliver several swift cutting attacks that can easily inflict heavy damage.

Akahoshi
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: N/A
Description: Auron performs a sweeping 360o roundhouse kick that is able to hit all enemies around him simultaneously.

Majo Gari
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: N/A
Description: Auron straightens his leg and performs a downward axe-kick at an enemy's head, intent on striking from above with the heel of his foot and slamming them into the ground.

Empty Skies
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: N/A
Description: Auron jumps at his enemy and repeatedly kicks downward, striking his enemies with multiple blows from his feet in rapid succession. He can increase or decrease the pace of the technique to knock enemies off their feet or hit them with a wild frenzy of kicks.

Crimson Gale Whirlwind
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: N/A
Description: Auron jumps into the air and hits his opponent with a swirling back kick.

Tonbogiri
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: N/A
Description: Auron spins around rapidly to build up speed before rushing toward his target. He channels and harnesses the momentum of his rotation to strike at a target with his hands and feet before bypassing them (similar to a samurai's iaido).

Otegine
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Description: Similar to Dynamic Entry, Auron leaps at his enemy and performs a quick thrust kick at his opponent's face or torso.

Nihongo
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: N/A
Description: Auron kicks his enemy into the air and grabs their arm while in mid-air. He then spins his body around rapidly, keeping his enemy's arm locked in his grasp, before hitting the ground and using the arm as a lever to slam their face straight into the ground.
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Annihilus
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: N/A
Jutsu Prerequisites: Earth Release: Earth Spear
Description: Auron strikes his enemy with a heavy punch augmented with destructive power of his hardened fists.

Monster Leg
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C-Rank
Jutsu Prerequisites: Hydrification Technique
Description: Auron liquefies either of his legs to extend his reach, allowing him to strike enemies from mid-range as his legs can act as whips or streams and splash enemies.


Water Release Jutsu

Mizuchi
Canon/Custom: Custom
Class: Supplementary
Rank: N/A
Jutsu Prerequisites: Hydrification Technique
Description: With the Hydrification Technique, the user liquefies their entire body, allowing them to perform quick movements, evasive maneuvers, and move through small spaces.

In their liquefied state, the user can scatter the liquid of their body at will and reconstitute their original form afterwards, so long as they are not attacked by a technique that prevents them from doing so, such as being affected with Lightning Release. They can also transform their body into a miniature tidal wave as a method of transportation. In this form, the liquid also enables them to perform quick moves, increasing their speed.

Water Release: Demon Fish
Canon/Custom: Canon
Class: Offensive, Defensive
Range: Short-Range
Jutsu Prerequisites: Hydrification Technique
Description: After using his Hydrification Technique to merge with a water source, Auron can form a giant wave that looks like a demon-like fish. Auron can use this form to battle larger opponents, or he can use it to shield allies from attack.

Water Clone Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Class: Supplementary
Rank: C-rank
Description: The Water Clone Technique is similar to the Shadow Clone Technique except it creates clones out of water that have one-tenth of the original person's power. Like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, as it can not travel very far from the original body without losing control. Like other clone techniques, if the water clones are injured enough they will revert back to normal water.

Water Release: Hiding in Water Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Class: Supplementary
Rank: D-rank 
Description: The user blends in with water to be undetected by the enemy, similar to the Earth Release: Hiding in Rock Technique.

Hiding in Mist Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Class: Supplementary
Rank: D-Rank
Description: This displacement technique causes a mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then going in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it.

Water Release: Water Encampment Wall
Canon/Custom: Canon
Class: Defensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short-Mid Range
Description: This defensive technique creates a wall of water around the user. Enemy attacks are completely intercepted by a fence of water blown out from the mouth, and is raised from below with tremendous might. The water is blown out in the form of a circle around the user, and it makes for a defense without openings. It is also possible for the user to control the amount of water and duration at will.

Instant Water
Canon/Custom: Canon (Video Game)
Class: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Rank: C-rank
Range: Short Range
Description: Employing his proficiency in Water Release, Auron releases a wave of water below his feet to act as jets to increase his speed which allows him to dash towards the opponent and attack with a shoulder bash or charge in for a close-combat technique

Water Release: Tearing Torrent
Canon/Custom:
Class: Offensive, Defensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Mid-range
Description: This technique creates water that spirals in the user's hand which fires at a high speed towards the enemy. The overall amount of water formed is large enough to help extinguish even large-scale Fire release techniques.

Water Release: Wild Water Wave
Canon/Custom: Canon
Class: Offensive
Rank: C-rank
Range: Short-Mid Range
Hand Seals: Dragon → Tiger → Hare
Description: Water gushes out from the mouth like a waterfall and washes away the enemy. One can freely control the power of this technique with the amount chakra one releases.

Water Release: Water Quaking Pillar
Canon/Custom: Canon (Game only)
Class: Offensive, Defensive
Rank: C-rank
Range: Short-Range
Description: Auron slams the ground with his fist or leg, causing a pillar of water to burst up around him. The pillar covers a wide area and is able to repulse multiple enemies away.

Water Release: Water Shark Bullet Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Class: Ofensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short-Mid range
Hand Seals: Tiger → Ox → Dragon → Hare → Dog → Bird → Rat → Clone seal → Dragon → Ram
Description: The user shapes water into the form of a large shark and thrusting their hand forward, sends it hurtling towards the opponent at high-speeds, resulting in a powerful impact. The user can also ride inside the water shark to dramatically increase their swimming speed.


Earth Release Jutsu

Earth Release: Earth Spear
Canon/Custom: Canon
Class: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Description: The user flows chakra through all parts of their body causing it to become noticeably darker, which increases their defensive power to its utmost limits by making the skin far harder than normal. Furthermore, the destructive power of physical attacks is increased. The amount of techniques that can break through the areas hardened by the Earth Spear are close to zero, excluding its undeniable weak point: Lightning Release ninjutsu.

Earth Release Armor
Canon/Custom: Canon
Class: Defensive, Supplementary
Description: This technique coats the user's body with stones, making them much more resistant to attacks. While using this armour, the stone layer can be manipulated to form blunt weapons for stronger attacks. One can also change their appearance with the stone layer. It also seems that this armour is heavy and makes the user less quick

Golem Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Class: Offensive, Defensive
Range: All Ranges
Description: This technique allows the user to create a large, humanoid creature composed of rock that can either be expelled from the user's mouth or formed from a nearby, pre-existing source of earth. Depending on the user, the golem can be formed instantly.

The size of the golem differs depending on use, but it always possesses an ample amount of brute strength and is very durable.

Earth Release: Earth and Stone Dragon
Canon/Custom: Canon
Class: Offensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Long-Range
Hand Seals: Horse → Dog → Bird → Ox → Snake
Description: The user creates a dragon made from the ground to attack the opponent.

Earth Release: Giant Earth Sword
Canon/Custom: Custom
Class: Offensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Long-Mid Range
Description: The user creates a slim pillar of rock and stone and causes it to spin violently and drill underground. The user can then direct the drilling pillar at their specific target, causing it to emerge from the ground, slam into the target, and potentially cause it to hit another obstacle with the enemy sandwiched in-between.

Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave
Canon/Custom: Canon
Class: Offensive
Range: Mid-Long Range
Hand Seals: Rat → Snake → Tiger
Description: The user creates and rides a wave of earth that can branch off to attack from a distance. The user can also use it to skilfully manipulate the terrain around them and their opponent.


Academy Jutsu

Kawarimi no Jutsu -- Body Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Requirements: N/A
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: A technique that allows the user to quickly switch places with another nearby object. Max 3 times a topic.

Bunshin no Jutsu -- Clone Technique
Rank: E
Requirements: N/A
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: A technique that creates intangible clones of the user. Because they are not real at all, they will dissipate if they come into contact with almost anything. They also cannot interact with their environment, easily giving away what they really are.

Nawanuke no Jutsu -- Rope Escape Technique
Rank: E
Requirements: N/A
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: The basic art of freeing oneself from rope bonds.

Henge no Jutsu -- Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Requirements: N/A
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: A technique that allows the user to alter their appearance. Though they may appear differently, they do not take on any of the physical characteristics of whatever they transform into.

Kinobori no Waza -- Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: D
Requirements: N/A
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: A technique derived from a training exercise that allows the user to walk on walls by focusing enough chakra through their feet to cause them to 'stick' to the surfaces.

Suimen Hokou no Waza -- Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: D
Requirements: N/A
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: A technique derived from a training exercise that allows the user to walk on the surface of water by focusing an even amount of chakra through the soles of their feet.

Shunshin no Jutsu -- Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Requirements: N/A
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: A high-speed movement that allows the user to move short distances at nearly untraceable speeds, accomplished by using chakra to boost the user's reflexes. Max use twice a topic.

Kai - Release
Rank: D+
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.


Other Jutsu

Summoning: Black Panther
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: Auron summons a lightly armored black panther to aid him in battle. He can also use it as a form of transportion.




Historical Information
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Auron was born to Reizo Hozuki and Mizuki Senzo in the village of Umigakure. Reizo was a Tokubetsu Jounin of Umigakure, specializing in espionage, while Mizuki was an fleeing refugee from Aranogakure after the tragedy the befell the village.

Mizuki was one of the few who managed to escape the disease, finding herself at the doorstep of Umigakure. She begged for entrance, requesting a merchant's pass into the village. She made a living selling wares and ninja tools on the street with what little capital she had until she met Reizo.

The romance between them blossomed and Auron was born exactly one year later. His childhood was a content one. He was a normal child, if not a little socially awkward.

When he first became an academy student, his prowess as a ninja was sub-par. Auron didn't begin to show any natural prowess until he turned 8 years old. His basic skills remained somewhat stunted, particularly his weapons accuracy.

Around this time, his father Reizo Hozuki taught him the Hozuki clan's special Hiden Ninjutsu, the Hydrification Technique. Auron graduate the academy at the age of 10 and successfully passed the chunin exams at the age of 13.

At the age of 15, as a chunin ninja, Auron was sent on a mission to investigate an incident in a small town within the boundaries of Umigakure. He elected to go alone instead of bringing along a back-up team. Unbeknownst to him however, the mission was quite a bit more difficult. When things became hairy and his mission status was nearly compromised, Auron burned the village to the ground to destroy the secret that he had uncovered. This would come to be known as 'Majora's Incident' to survivors with Auron gaining his trademark nickname for the mask he wore.

He spent the next few years on missions until he was promoted to jonin at the age of 18, much to his surprise. At the age of 20, he was one of 3 candidates that Umikage selected for ANBU candidacy. He officially joined the ANBU a month later in a ceremony held in a quiet dark room.



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PostSubject: Re: Auron Nakamura   Tue Aug 20, 2013 3:45 pm

FINALLY

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PostSubject: Re: Auron Nakamura   Tue Aug 20, 2013 6:59 pm

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Remove this as after approval you want be adding this to your character so its pointless to have it.

You have the hozuki clan (water body and a Kg) of heat release/heat control wont be possible for the two to go together first that it is heat which would dry up the water in your body meaning that you would kill yourself in the process. Second these are two seperate clans. Third as a hozuki you have to keep yourself hydrated at all times something your KG wont allow you to so this is a no i am afraid to say.

Barrier: Primeval Beast Wall
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Barrier Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Description: The user creates a barrier out of azure-colored flames in the direction he is facing to act as a powerful counter against techniques imbued with Bijuu chakra. The barrier rejects most techniques from Bijuu but can also be overwhelmed if enough chakra is poured into it. It is also extremely chakra-taxing on the jutsu caster


why would you need something like this you are not a kage or a bijuu holder or even a bad guy so again no remove or change this.

Majora's Mask-- remove the stats from underneath the picture as there are no stats here.



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PostSubject: Re: Auron Nakamura   Wed Aug 21, 2013 6:17 pm

I have made the changes necessary.

Primeval Beast Wall: I added this simply because I was running out of ideas to use for jutsu. Wasn't really based on need but something unique I guess. I replaced it with a panther summon.

Heat Control: As you said, I am disappointed to have to remove this. Took me a while to figure this out. I'm tempted to keep it and switch out the Hydration instead, but I will stick with what I have. I had a suspicion this would be the case so I switched in Earth Release instead as a backup.

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PostSubject: Re: Auron Nakamura   Wed Aug 21, 2013 7:27 pm

Need some more weaknesses as you have 4 when you have 5 strength and make sure they balance on another out.

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PostSubject: Re: Auron Nakamura   Wed Aug 21, 2013 9:18 pm

Added the weakness pertaining to liquid body and dehydration.
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PostSubject: Re: Auron Nakamura   Thu Aug 22, 2013 2:06 am

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PostSubject: Re: Auron Nakamura   Fri Aug 23, 2013 4:41 am

A-ranks are limited to 3 strengths and weaknesses.

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PostSubject: Re: Auron Nakamura   Fri Aug 23, 2013 4:54 am

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PostSubject: Re: Auron Nakamura   Fri Aug 23, 2013 5:31 am

  • Large chakra pool needs a percentage.
  • Physical Prowess is two strengths bundled into one.

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PostSubject: Re: Auron Nakamura   Fri Aug 23, 2013 5:56 am

Alrighty. Changed both of those.
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PostSubject: Re: Auron Nakamura   Fri Aug 23, 2013 6:17 am

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