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PostSubject: Azayma Kyuzuro   Fri May 17, 2013 1:37 am


❊ Azayma Kyuzuro ❊






"Let the winds of fate guide you and the storms of anger crush your enemies.. "

Personal Information

NICKNAME(S): Divine Wind Kyuzu, The Man with Crimson Eyes (When Seen)
AGE: 25
GENDER: Male
BLOOD TYPE: O  
VILLAGE: Wanderer
VILLAGE RANK: Wanderer
SKILL RANK: A
EXTRAS: Blazing red Hair, Green eyes


Appearance Information

HEIGHT:  5’9”
WEIGHT:  180 Lbs
HAIR COLOR: Crimson Red
EYE COLOR: Green
MEASUREMENTS: N/a ( want to know the size of my d*** meet IC )
LOOKS IMAGE:
LOOKS DESCRIPTION: Azayma is always seen with a black half cut shirt which shows of his perfectly sculpted abs and an open white jacket that slopes down his sides. His hair stands out the most, being as bright as a fire despite his moniker and status. His eyes are a gentle green color, but as to obtained the Man with the Crimson eyes remains to be seen. He also wears brown fingerless gloves and black pants, but when seen he is often covered in a long black cloak that reveals his green eyes and red hair.


Personality Information

PERSONALITY INFORMATION:
Kyuzuro is a wild current waiting to blow across the world. He is always optimistic in nature and a happy individual, eager to help any who need his assistance. When around kids or children in general, he will sit and play music to them, of course not showing his face, but giving them something beautiful to listen to. In any case Kyuzuro is just a simple breeze. Not really having any other emotions, he usually will keep quiet or speak in riddles to either confuse or make them leave him alone. Never one to complain or make a fuss, Kyuzuro generally is the one to quell any and all altercations that arise around him, usually being called a negotiator by many who would see him actually work.  



LIKES:
• Peace
• Harmony
• The Wind
• Cherry Blossoms
DISLIKES:
• Destruction
• Illogical Morals
• Dandelions
CATCH PHRASE(S): Fighting: Allow me to show you what a gentle breeze can do.
• Traveling: where will the wind take me today
• Random: Did you know that I wrestled a bear…it became my pet shortly after.
NINDO: By the winds breeze and the skies wisdom, all who slay for no reason shall perish.



Equipment Information

NAME: Wind Sheer
TYPE: Blade
APPEARANCE: (A picture or brief description of the object.)
RANK: S
SPECIAL ABILITY: The Wind Sheer is a blade created to function for exactly what  Kyuzuro needs. The ability of the blade when using chakra allows him to control the pressure and currents of the wind, allowing him to make blades of wind every time he swings it through the air. Each blade is a meter in length and width, a max of thirty can be made and their range being twenty meters. The damage of the blades are equal to a jutsu of B rank status.
ORIGIN: Made by Kyuzuro

SIMPLE EQUIPMENT:
• X 10 explosive tags
• X 5 10 meter Wire
• X 20 Shuriken
• X 2 scrolls



Combat Information

CLAN: Uchiha
JUTSU SPECIALTIES:

    Main:
    Ninjutsu
    Sub:
    Fuuinjutsu
    Kenjutsu

ELEMENTAL AFFINITY(S):

    Main: Wind
    Sub: Fire, Water

SPECIAL CHARACTERISTICS:
Wind God: Due to his enhanced mastery of wind, Kyuzuro can make large gusts of wind without using too much of his chakra, and by also using the same wind currents he can mask his presence.  With this all Wind Jutsu that he would use, the amount of chakra that they take is reduced by one whole rank. It takes a minimum of a D ranks amount of chakra to maintain the control of the wind.

Extreme Speed/Wind Blades: Using his Wind Manipulation, he can increase his speed by twenty percent, almost reaching body flicker speed. This can only last for three posts, but enables him to speed past his enemies. When running, due to his increased speed, he makes blades off wind shoot from his body in a three meter distance everywhere around him. It requires a minimal amount of D ranked chakra to manipulate the wind on this level.

Large Chakra Pool: Kyuzuro has spent ten years working on a way to increase his chakra pool and he had finally succeeded in doing so without the need of being in a village. Now he has a Chakra pool that is larger than an ANBU, but lower than a Kage.
FLAWS/WEAKNESSES:
Manipulation of Elements: Kyuzuro gave up the ability to use higher forms of jutsu and due to this he can only use up to C rank of each of his respective elements Except for Wind.

Are ya Mad??: Kyuzuro is unable to get mad even if his loved ones are killed in front of him due to a vow he made with his brother. In the event that he would become angry, he would become enraged and attack any and every one until his rage was quelled or killed.

Insomnia is for winners: Kyuzuro constantly suffers from insomnia due to him constantly traveling. Because of this he is always suffering from a constant 30% decrease of his natural speed and stamina.


Jutsu Information

Academy Jutsu:
 

Fuuinjutsu Techniques:
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Water Jutsu:
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Fire Technique’s
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Wind Ninjutsu:

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History Information


HISTORY
Born Originally in Raiugakure, Kyuzuro was born into a family of Uchiha. His features were nothing like his families so from a young age he was believed to be adopted. From the ages of five to ten, he grew up like a normal kid, training to be a ninja while playing around, but Kyuzuro was just like the wind, always moving around no matter the situation. He never attended the Academy for the fact that he himself believed that one had to train himself to become stronger. He spent his childhood studying amongst the wild and studying a different variety of chakra. Through learning by experience and through trial and error, Kyuzuro had easily surpassed most of the kids his age.  He and his brother were the closest and even went on to train with each other. One day they made a pact to never get angry or mad for any reason, but the right reason.

For three years of his life, Kyuzuro and his brother left from the village to further their training by staying in a forest far from their village with only the provisions they needed and each other. Testing their limits they would hunt and live off of the wild, training their bodies and mind. After the third year, the two boys returned to their home to show what they had learned to not only their parents but their peers. Kyuzuro decided to challenge one of the kids who had just became chuunin to show that self taught skill and determination can overcome the training that went on in the village. The chuunin scoffed at what he said, but decided to fight him anyways thinking he could be him withing 30 seconds. A minute and a half passed and the chuunin boy was on the ground beaten by one who had none of the villages training. Though many of his peers saw him as a threat, was simply doing what he felt was right for him which finally showed him that his place was not in the village.

As time went on, he would come to find that he did not like the way the villages were ran and thus decided to leave. Although his family was against it, he packed his bags at eighteen and left from the village to never return.  As time went on Kyuzuro was spotted amongst the lands, although for some reason he had a reward on his head for leaving, but no one could ever catch up to him to actually claim it. One day he had finally decided to return to Raiu to visit his mother and father, but found the village to be utterly and completely destroyed.  Walking amongst the rubble he would remember his promise and sigh as he stood where he house would have been. Now that his home was a wasteland, Kyuzuro decided to travel the world to find who did this and bring them to justice. He now travels around as a bard, his face always kept hidden from view of anyone that may be looking for him.  



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PostSubject: Re: Azayma Kyuzuro   Sat May 18, 2013 3:52 am

NAME: Wind Sheer
TYPE: Blade
APPEARANCE: (A picture or brief description of the object.)
RANK: S
SPECIAL ABILITY: The Wind Sheer is a blade created to function for exactly what Kyuzuro needs. The ability of the blade allows him to control the pressure and currents of the wind, allowing him to make blades of wind every time he swings it through the air.
ORIGIN: Made by Kyuzuro


needs ranges of the winds arcs and how many etc and how big they are


Wind God: Due to his enhanced mastery of wind, Kyuzuro can make large gusts of wind without using his chakra, and by also using the same wind currents he can fly or otherwise mask his presence. In combat he can make a veil of wind to surround his body, protecting him from lightning based attacks. With this all Wind Jutsu that he would use, the amount of chakra that they take is reduced by one whole rank.

too much nerf this a lot too many abilities in one.


Uchiha clan is full/not accepting more members.




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PostSubject: Re: Azayma Kyuzuro   Sat May 18, 2013 3:54 am

NAME: Wind Sheer
TYPE: Blade
APPEARANCE: (A picture or brief description of the object.)
RANK: S
SPECIAL ABILITY: The Wind Sheer is a blade created to function for exactly what Kyuzuro needs. The ability of the blade allows him to control the pressure and currents of the wind, allowing him to make blades of wind every time he swings it through the air.
ORIGIN: Made by Kyuzuro


needs ranges of the winds arcs and how many etc and how big they are


Wind God: Due to his enhanced mastery of wind, Kyuzuro can make large gusts of wind without using his chakra, and by also using the same wind currents he can fly or otherwise mask his presence. In combat he can make a veil of wind to surround his body, protecting him from lightning based attacks. With this all Wind Jutsu that he would use, the amount of chakra that they take is reduced by one whole rank.

too much nerf this a lot too many abilities in one.


Uchiha clan is full/not accepting more members.



Name: Reverse Four Symbols Sealing Technique
Rank: S
Requirements: N/A
Description: This technique is a fuinjutsu that the user places across their chest, and sets it to activate upon their death. The technique releases four symbols from the user's body that then form a large, black sphere around them. Anything caught inside the sphere's area is then drawn in and sealed within the user's corpse. It also has the opposite effect of the Four Symbols Seal.

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PostSubject: Re: Azayma Kyuzuro   Sat May 18, 2013 5:10 am

Would like to point out that there are only 2 active Uchiha making the clan still eligible to join
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PostSubject: Re: Azayma Kyuzuro   Sat May 18, 2013 5:32 am

Everything was fixed and to knowledge there are 3 Uchiha spots meaning 2 were open
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PostSubject: Re: Azayma Kyuzuro   Sat May 18, 2013 6:31 pm

Wind God: Due to his enhanced mastery of wind, Kyuzuro can make large gusts of wind without using his chakra, and by also using the same wind currents he can fly or otherwise mask his presence. With this all Wind Jutsu that he would use, the amount of chakra that they take is reduced by one whole rank. It takes a minimum of a D ranks amount of chakra to maintain the control of the rain.


Again no, special abilites should be 1 ability not multiple like this has. Large gusts of wind without chakra is 1, he can fly thats two. three he can mask his presence and 4th wind jutsus are reduced by one wrong too much. Flying as well is either for summons or the limited ability Iwagakure flying ability that goes with dust release users any other type of flying a no so change this ability so it does 1 thing only not 4.


NAME: Wind Sheer
TYPE: Blade
APPEARANCE: (A picture or brief description of the object.)
RANK: S
SPECIAL ABILITY: The Wind Sheer is a blade created to function for exactly what Kyuzuro needs. The ability of the blade allows him to control the pressure and currents of the wind, allowing him to make blades of wind every time he swings it through the air. Each blade is a meter in length and width, a max of thirty can be made and their range being twenty meters.
ORIGIN: Made by Kyuzuro

state that the weapon users chakra to form the blades.


Extreme Speed/Wind Blades: Using his Wind Manipulation, he can increase his speed by twenty percent, almost reaching body flicker speed. This can only last for three posts, but enables him to speed past his enemies. When running, due to his increased speed, he makes blades off wind shoot from his body in a three meter distance everywhere around him. It requires a minimal amount of D ranked chakra to manipulate the wind on this level.


1 ability only.


Name: Eight Trigrams Sealing Style
Rank: S
Requirements: N/A
Description: The Eight Trigrams Sealing Style, consists of two Four Symbols Seals. To perform the technique, the user must first summon a ceremonial throne, and place the target on it. It can be used to tap into the power of the Nine-Tailed Fox.

Uzumaki fuuinjutsu need to be one in order to use it. I would make some custom fuuinjutsu if I was you much easier.







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PostSubject: Re: Azayma Kyuzuro   Sat May 18, 2013 7:03 pm

Extreme Speed/Wind Blades: Using his Wind Manipulation, he can increase his speed by twenty percent, almost reaching body flicker speed. This can only last for three posts, but enables him to speed past his enemies. When running, due to his increased speed, he makes blades off wind shoot from his body in a three meter distance everywhere around him. It requires a minimal amount of D ranked chakra to manipulate the wind on this level.

This is one ability, the blade are an after effect of the speed


Wind God: Due to his enhanced mastery of wind, Kyuzuro can make large gusts of wind without using his chakra, and by also using the same wind currents he can fly or otherwise mask his presence. With this all Wind Jutsu that he would use, the amount of chakra that they take is reduced by one whole rank. It takes a minimum of a D ranks amount of chakra to maintain the control of the rain.

Is also ONE whole ability, it is broken down by its capabilities, its not four separate it one whole. It is just explained with greater detail
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PostSubject: Re: Azayma Kyuzuro   Sun May 19, 2013 4:53 am

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Extreme Speed/Wind Blades: Using his Wind Manipulation, he can increase his speed by twenty percent, almost reaching body flicker speed. This can only last for three posts, but enables him to speed past his enemies. When running, due to his increased speed, he makes blades off wind shoot from his body in a three meter distance everywhere around him. It requires a minimal amount of D ranked chakra to manipulate the wind on this level.
What differentiates this from a jutsu/technique exactly? Not saying you can't keep it, but just saying that it seems more like a jutsu. If you decide to keep it, then add a cool down to it to counteract the fact that it has a duration.

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NAME: Wind Sheer
TYPE: Blade
APPEARANCE: (A picture or brief description of the object.)
RANK: S
SPECIAL ABILITY: The Wind Sheer is a blade created to function for exactly what Kyuzuro needs. The ability of the blade when using chakra allows him to control the pressure and currents of the wind, allowing him to make blades of wind every time he swings it through the air. Each blade is a meter in length and width, a max of thirty can be made and their range being twenty meters.
ORIGIN: Made by Kyuzuro
How strong are these blades of wind exactly? Either state how they would affect a person or the rank of damage - D, C, B, etc.


Your flaws still don't match up to your advantages. As far as I count you have three major advantages, one major flaw and two minor flaws.

Also, any explanation as to a Uchiha having wind as their main rather than fire? It's not farfetched, but it's something you should remember.
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PostSubject: Re: Azayma Kyuzuro   Sun May 19, 2013 4:58 am

Uchiha's do not technically have to have Fire as an element, although it is not common but it can happen.

My flaws actually do play apart to my strengths due to the fact that if you have no sleep for at least a week, your fighting capabilities will be hindered, same with the rage issue.

The cool down for Extremespeed is 3 posts which is the same as the activation duration
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PostSubject: Re: Azayma Kyuzuro   Sun May 19, 2013 5:30 am

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My flaws actually do play apart to my strengths due to the fact that if you have no sleep for at least a week, your fighting capabilities will be hindered, same with the rage issue.
I already told you how easy it is for this to be metagamed which is why it remains a minor flaw. I mean, these are personality flaws that anyone can have - but it depends on the role player to decide when to bring it up, just like you can. For example if you were to go on a mission you can easily disregard it and say he doesn't suffer from it this mission because he got good sleep.

So, yes, both of them can be metagamed and are completely occasional where as you have three advantages which you can constantly use.
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PostSubject: Re: Azayma Kyuzuro   Sun May 19, 2013 5:55 am

Okay i gave a decrease for insomnia making it constant so that is two 30% decreases
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PostSubject: Re: Azayma Kyuzuro   Sun May 19, 2013 6:02 am

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PostSubject: Re: Azayma Kyuzuro   Sun May 19, 2013 3:41 pm

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