Naruto Lands Of Shinobi
Welcome to NLOS a Custom Role playing site if you have any question first please check the rules section but if you feel something has been missed you may Contact the owner NLOS Admin for details or come again another time.


Naruto Lands Of Shinobi . The Land of the ever changing dreams.
 
HomeCalendarFAQSearchRegisterLog in

Share | 
 

 River, Resonate

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
Resonate River

avatar

Posts : 45
Age : 21
Village : Ex-Raiu
Rank : S rank missing

PostSubject: River, Resonate   Fri Jun 07, 2013 7:58 am


❊ Resonate River ❊



Spoiler:
 

"Is it me.... or did this sin fill the hearts of the weak?"


Personal Information


NICKNAME(S): Near(A mixture of his name from taking many letters from his name and mixing them together) N and Aeon (Because the wielder of the clock blade is said to be given the name as a honor.)
AGE: 42
GENDER: Male
BLOOD TYPE: O
VILLAGE: Ex-Raiugakure

    VILLAGE RANK: S Rank Missing Ninja
    SKILL RANK: S

EXTRAS: Looks extremely young although he should look in his forties, and his hair is the opposite of his actual clan’s common hair. Red eyes which were said to of appeared when he became greedy and prideful.

Appearance Information


HEIGHT: 5’ 4”
WEIGHT: 121
HAIR COLOR: Light Blue
EYE COLOR: red
MEASUREMENTS:  
LOOKS IMAGE: [Picture at front]
LOOKS DESCRIPTION: Near has the looks of a very young man, although he is in his forties he looks as if he is 18ish. Near has a lot more piercing than seen on his ears, he also has some on his nipples and his bellybutton. He doesn't wear a shirt of any kind under his black jacket, but instead he wears soft armor meant to stop the impact of Kunai{Will be made} Near soft cream colored skinned match with his dark cream upper lip. To match his jacket he wears black pants and black shoes. Around his neck are bandages which cover the burn on his neck.


Personality Information


PERSONALITY INFORMATION: Near is a brutal, evil villain. From birth he has taken on a role of being stuck up and a jerk to those who were not delivered from the wound of his mother, his mother being the wife of the man that lead the clan. In the eyes of Near being a leader was an honor. It was his dream. He dreamed of becoming a ruler of the world with his clan by his side. Through the ages of 13 - 15 he gain a type of humility and friendliness with his comrade, which he now feels only got in the way of his goal to become the heir to the throne. At the age of 19 the young male gained a new view on life, a hateful view as he learned of his brother becoming the heir to the throne in the clan.

Near came to hate anyone who would aim for the same goal as him, and so he choose a goal which he felt only he could obtain. The goal of the leader of the Ninja world. Near's hateful spirit filled his heart and caused him to fight his brother as if they were never blood. Near gained the ability to suppress his emotions to that point that the emotion of sadness had no type of hold over his body. Soon Near gained that after the destruction of his home. He seemed to of lost everything in the explosion. Putting him on the borderline. Near became confused of what he wanted, Revenge for his home and family, or to continue his goal to the top of the world. As the Heir to the throne of his clan, and as one of the last surviving members, Near has gained yet another goal, A Rebirth of his clan and rise to the top of them all.

A Faker: Near is known for being a giant faker around people he has just met, Being that his main goal is to gain there trust and use them like a puppet in a puppet collection. By acting like a harmless eighteen year old boy, he can make it seem as if he is one of the survivors of the Raiugakure attack, cause most to feel sorry for the man.

Pride:
This is a sin that appears to be shown through him the most. Even without trying to show it the pride inside can just come out in a burst of hate. The reason he has this pride is because of the power he thinks is better then any other in the world. With his pride comes a small hatred of any other person who dares to rise up and utter that they are higher in power then him, this angers him severely and causes another sin to rise from his body.

Wrath:
Wrath is the sin Near compresses so that he is able to carry on with life without taking out everything he sees. Even though is is compressed it is the second sin that dwells in his body, following it are the sins of Greed and envy, the same sins in which cause him to take the great sword from his brother. His envy of his brother being the new heir grew to a point he could not simply turn back. The Next sin that comes into play is the sin of Lust in which causes his sexual organs t want sex with the human species. It is close to the most compressed sin in his body, because of Near being able to go twenty years without actual passionate human contact. The last two which seem to never appear in the boy are the sins of sloth and gluttony. Only at certain times in his life has Near been reduced to these two sins.

Though when it comes down to him and his ways, Near doesn't allow for his enemy to get the quick death they always wanted. His pride and his wrath mix, Causing him to pausing during each severing of a limb and making speeches about his power of the Thunder god. Laughing during each second, much like a sadist. As he watches his enemy suffer every second, this is something which feels him with joy.


LIKES: Chaos and Disorder, Two of the main things that amuse Aeon in many ways. One of Aeon's Favorite sayings are "My Joy comes from hate and my hate comes from joy" Meaning that Aeon Loves to see hatred around the ninja world, he loves to see sorrow and death, anything that causes sadness and hate, makes him happier. Unlike many, Aeon has more then two favorite colors, this being Black Red and Blue, as he thinks that they symbolize the beaten body of a human, but also the mix of Red and blue being purple, a common color for chaos. War, as Aeon says "Is fun to watch", noting his like of carnage and blood to be spread across the field, and his Love for the Seven Sins.
DISLIKES: He hates everything that can deal with happiness in the world, He hates the flowers, the trees, the human beings that walk its earth, but he still wants it as his own. Though he hates to see the side of evil win, he also hates to see that of the side of good to win even more. Truthfully if either began to win of the other, Aeon would take it upon himself to "Balance it out". He hates to be outdone by anyone, much like a psycho, he will go on an outrage.
CATCH PHRASE(S): “IF EVERYTHING IS YOURS!! WHAT THE FUCK IS MINE?...... Ponder it while i take the world as my own.”
NINDO: All Must fall at his hand... or failure is sure to live in a world of hate.


Equipment Information


NAME: The Age of Aeon
TYPE: Blade
APPEARANCE:
Spoiler:
 
RANK:B
SPECIAL ABILITY: It has the ability to slowly grow by pumping chakra into the blade for 6 post. After so it grows 3 inches in length. After 60 post it can no longer gain Length, but as a bonus the user can return the blade back to its normal size by pumping the chakra back into his own body, so in a sense it can allow the user to store chakra in it and use it for later. It is originally 7 feet long. The clock feature on it allows for the blades to be adjusted with time.
ORIGIN: This weapon is an old family weapon that all children are given once they reach the age of 10, to try and master. And if they have not mastered it, the weapon is taken from them and given to the next in line. The weilder is also said to be the Heir to throne of the clan. Near gained this weapon through an intense fight with his own brother who owned the weapon. After cutting off his hand and taking the weapon he left his brother to die.

SIMPLE EQUIPMENT:

  • 10 Kunai  


Combat Information


CLAN: River Clan - http://narutolandsofshinobi.pro-forum.co.uk/t723-river-clan#3569
JUTSU SPECIALTIES:

    Main: Ninjutsu
    Sub: Taijutsu Genjutsu

ELEMENTAL AFFINITY(S):

    Main:Lightning
    Sub: Wind and Water Clan: Thunder

SPECIAL CHARACTERISTICS:

Near’s bones are as if they are combined with the bones of 4 others, being extremely strong and sturdy and able to withstand his own jutsu for a good amount of times. The reason is because of his experimentation with the human bone structure.

Near has a large pool of chakra from constantly charging it into his Aeon blade and allowing his chakra to fill back up before adding it back into his body and expanding his chakra reserves.



FLAWS/WEAKNESSES: Near’s movements are chuunin level compared to the speed he should have, the reason is because of the bones in his body and how dense they are.

Skin that is extremely weak against sharp objects, with little force his skin can be penetrated by them, as well as fire techniques his skin is easily burnt. With the weak skin comes a high resistance to medical jutsu, meaning no normal low level medical jutsu can heal his wounds.




Jutsu Information


Academy Jutsu:
 

Normal Canon Jutsu:
Spoiler:
 

Normal Custom Jutsu:
Spoiler:
 

Water Jutsu:
Spoiler:
 

Lightning Jutsu:
Spoiler:
 

Custom Lightning Jutsu:
Spoiler:
 

Wind Jutsu
Spoiler:
 


Custom Wind Jutsu:
Spoiler:
 
Thunder Jutsu
Spoiler:
 








History Information



HISTORY
Pre-Academy:
When Resonate was born he was Born in an unknown village to a family of three before he came unto the world. Making it now a family of four. His mother was miss Saleen River, the woman who seemed to be the leader of the Anbu, he skilled seemed to surpass others, until she was taken down on a mission and had her leg cut off.  His father was Jaken River who was the a low ranked jounin in the village. The Baby they made, Resonate, was given to them as a present from the gods and was meant for greatness. Near's older brother was also one who was meant for greatness, as their dad had been the leader of the clan. Reaching the age of five Near was entered into the Academy to begin his pursuit for the heir to the throne. It was also known that his father was the Leader of the clan and was to bestow the powers of the clan upon the son that would take his throne and become the leader of the clan, a great leader.

Academy:
One day his mother and father decided that is was time for him to go to the academy and become like others a ninja. He wanted for an academy teacher that would be patient with him but instead it was a man with an eye patch, who seemed to have a growing temper on him, but he didn't care as long as he got all of the things need to be done to become a ninja things would go great. on the first day the man had handed out books which had on there 'My Ninja Way'. A book that seemed to differ from its actual name, But none the less he read it through. after weeks of the academy he graduated on time with the others nothing special just doing as told. Receiving his headband he looked at it for a second. Leaving out the room and putting on the headband. He was now a genin.

Genin:
The first actual full day of being a genin was the day he meet his jonin leader. who was actually a family friend to the River family. The man was one known as the mask, who never showed what was behind his large mask that covered his face and hair. After meeting his comrades the young boy questioned himself. As his brother at this time was already done with the chuunin exams and headed for the Jounin. This seemed to anger him a bit. Him and his team began to create a bond in which seemed unbreakable. After only taking three missions the Mask entered the three into the chuunin exams. Upon their entry they were met with a large challenge in the forest of death. A beast that devoured genin. The beast took the arm of Near's young male comrade and headed for Near. Upon impact near was able to shock the beast, paralyzing it. Turning he picked up his friend and ran away with the female member of the team. They soon made it to the Finals, as the chuunin deemed the young boy unable to fight, leaving Near and the girl. After she had lost Near was left to go on and take on his greatest challenge. It had been one of his own brother's comrades who did not pass the exam the year before. This gave near hope as he defeated the boy in the final round and gained his new title. Still a step behind his own brother.

Chuunin:
Finally announced as a chuunin Near left his team and trained on his own for a few years with a bunch of ninjutsu and other arts in the way of the ninja for his fighting style. It was during this time that his brother was deemed the heir to the throne. Unknown of this the young boy continued his training outside of the village of Raiugakure. The powers of the Thunder release were written into the Thunder hill's scroll. A scroll in which dwelled far from the actual clan. Near's brother had taken this trip long before he did, but did not learn every jutsu written in the scroll. After five year's time the boy learned the jutsu and gained a new level of power. As well as a new level of pride. This was what made Near, Near. Upon his walk home, he noticed the changes in his body and voice and knew he was ready for the weapon of aeon to be his. As he returned to his village, he noticed its many changes but never acknowledged them. Walking to his kage he demanded to be tested in the jounin exams and was granted his wish. Upon entering them he would be given info on his own brother and how he became the heir of the clan. Angering Near a bit. After a day the boy passed the exams at the age of 18.

Jounin:
Near, now a jounin, has not forgotten his pledge to get revenge for his fallen comrades. He does mission of a variety of sorts, in addition to strategical planning. In addition, he continues to shun the trivialities of love. Why bother with love? It ended in the death of his friends, his comrades. Why SHOULD he care fr it? Love was an emotion that humans should outgrow. But, those are just his own opinions. It was also his opinion that he must make sure someone, somewhere, pays for the death of his friends. The young man which had given up all emotions had found an emotion which gave him more power than before. The power of wrath. His want to kill grew even more through the days of being a jounin in the village he had now been resting in called Hidden oasis. Now beig a jounin Nate needed a new look, a look that could describe him as something different to his enemies, with the black hair and the piercings, he wanted to be described as something of a spawn from hell. The words that made this look complete as he sat at the gates I his village were "Shall all ninja fall to me, to. Create the hill of lives." The young mans laugh filled the village. Soon after the young boy would leave his village. without a sign of remorse. Taking the sword and the scar that his brother left upon his neck and not turning back. He would not long be named Near, the man farthest from earth and nearest to all heavens. The boy slowly became a missing ninja for hire. Being that his village was soon destroyed and he was left with no home to head back to.

Missing Ninja:
During a long night of thinking, the young boy, Near, had waited for his brother to appear and fight him as the heir of the clan. At the age of 20, he was now sure he could control the family weapon, but his bother would not allow for him to take it from his hands. That night the young boy made his way to his brother's room, beginning a fight in the clan's home. This fight torn down most of the buildings in the clan's area. After finishing his brother by cutting off his arm and taking the blade away the young boy would leave in the dead of night. The clan members not knowing of this till the morning, as the young brother would lay to die. Although word was given he did not die. That night the young boy waited for a savior to appear unto him as he whispered words of the best of them all. Upon his eyes came his sin that took him in as his own. With the blade in hand the boy left raiugakure and headed toward a new world. Ever since he left he had never thought of returning to his old village until the info was given to him that the village had been obliterated by a very strong ninja. And so his next quest to gain power and reign over all..... began.


Miscellaneous Information


RP SAMPLE
Animal Path:

Chikushōdō began to run up a building by jumping from side to side of the two buildings. As things were about to get hectic in the village hidden in the leaf. Their friends were all ready to go and this was just a spot a lot of people wanted gone. Chikushodo's hair moved back and forth from the left and the right. Finally to the top of the building she stood there looking toward the village's gates, as she saw them, the people who were apart of her own self. As her Black attire had only covered most of her body, her legs were out and her boobs were almost able to be seen. The girl was very young for her age, But that was only because the girl was actually already dead. This was Tifa Shinoku's body which had been brought back by the mysterious man. As her soft Voice began to speak she said. "Bring on the pain, to the damned to Hell village....." Stopping in her tracks.

Asura Path

Only second after the girl was speaking a man had jumped down right next to her. He had a smile on his face as he had black curly like hair. his and the girls eyes were the same with the rippled eye in them. something strange had been going on. As the same people from before stood there and watched the two speak loudly over the village. He began to talk as his voice was different from the girls but further from the guys. ".....And show them what true power is. Your Hokage has committed treason and has threatened my village...." He said as the villagers begun to hear the man. He stopped talking as another thud was heard. The wind from the person blew up his red and black hair and made the bandages around his head blow off easily.

Naraka Path

A man with Blond hair came down. Falling right next to Shurado, His name was Jigokudo. Jigokudo looked around at all the people as the wind from his landing blew up his hair. As the hair fell down Jigokudo began to talk once again. "........I do not take lightly the act of threatening me and my village. I have no fear and i have nothing to worry about if i was to destroy you with this village......." Jigokudo had now stopped talking as he shifted his eyes back and forth looking at the village the ripples had become a crystal type of color. His clothing had resembled that of a konoha ninja' clothing, with the leaf Head band on it as well. This man was the once great J uzumaki senior.

Preta Path

Another man had came from the sky. His name was Gakido, another person from the group seen by the gates not to long ago. He showed up at the point of the last word from Jigokudo, they had all been standing in a row of how they had gotten there, Chikushodo, Shurado, Jigokudo and Gakido. As he had a great big smile on his face, Taking his hand and moving the blue hair, Which had fell into his face after his landing, out of his way. Starting to talk like the others had done. "......And after i take out this village i will be on my way with the bodies of the elders and the Hokage himself, im going to let this whole village be a witness of this great battle and their own destruction. And watch you all stand in awe as i win over the useless village........" Gakido said in his deep manly voice, with the smile of a tiger. His eyes had greenish blue paint around them. This man was the one known as the Crystal Giant, Hikane Crystalic.

Human Path

Ningendo, the fifth of the seven paths, Had shown up only walking to the side of Gakido. The man had silver hair and showed on his face that one of his eye sockets had been cut during his life, By J uzumaki. He wore skin tight clothing that could reach over his nose but he had choose not to wear it in that way. ".........if you would like to leave now, you may, but be warned if you don't leave i shall not spare your soul if you stand in my way as i walk, or attack as i talk........" Ningendo said to the public as low a voice he could as if he didn't want them to hear him. He took a look to the front of the group to see the final of them all come in to the group. Ningendo looked back at the girl. This was the body of Kutono Kaguya.

Deva Path

Tendo was now standing in front of the whole group as he had a serious face on. His figure was like a normal emotional person, or as would some people call them an Emo. Tendo wasted no time to get to the building with the others. His voice was the deepest and the scariest. "Now shall we begin the massacre of the village hidden in the leaf, show them what person like me can do to you in only a few seconds. Attack Six Paths of Pride!!" Tendo yelled as his arms went out in a sense as if telling them to scatters out through the village. his black hair blew back only a second after that had went on and he went on ahead with them. This man was the body of J uchiha jr. Chikushodo to the West, Tendo to the north, headed for the kage's office, Ningendo to the East, Gakido to the south, Jigokudo went with Tendo and Shurado to the south with Gakido.

Outer Path

Near had already been gone from sight of the village taking his leave to the middle of the forest till he had been needed. Controlling the bodies near spoke through each of the bodies toward the village, having fun with this as if he was talking to himself but really talking to a whole village without actually facing them, He had left the girl, Wrath at the gates alone as he turned into lava and went deep under ground to keep himself safe during the whole attack. things were about to get hectic and he needed to be far away from that village as possible keeping his
new Summoning near him the whole time. This was Neo-Near.
OTHER DETAILS:
FACE CLAIM DOGS: Bullets and Carnage - Heine as Near
ROLE PLAYER'S NAMEJayy
PASSWORD  ADMIN CHECKED
[/b]


Last edited by Near on Fri Jun 07, 2013 11:16 pm; edited 5 times in total
Back to top Go down
Hirano Arumi
Moderator
Moderator
avatar

Posts : 543

Ninja Info
Jutsu Tokens:
0/1  (0/1)

PostSubject: Re: River, Resonate   Fri Jun 07, 2013 7:49 pm

The entire personality and large parts of the history are copy-pasted from your first character. Hell, you didn't even remember to change the name every time. Come up with a personality and history for this character.

_________________

Approved Missions:
D: 2
C: 3
B: 1
A: 0
S: 0

Rank-up points: 13

How Not to Write a Novel wrote:
Some writers are convinced that since great modern authors like Joyce and Faulkner are difficult to understand, writing that is difficult to understand is therefore great writing. This is a form of magical thinking, analogous to the belief that the warrior who dons the pelt of a lion thereby acquires its strength and cunning.
Back to top Go down
Resonate River

avatar

Posts : 45
Age : 21
Village : Ex-Raiu
Rank : S rank missing

PostSubject: Re: River, Resonate   Fri Jun 07, 2013 10:31 pm

Edited v-v
Back to top Go down
Hirano Arumi
Moderator
Moderator
avatar

Posts : 543

Ninja Info
Jutsu Tokens:
0/1  (0/1)

PostSubject: Re: River, Resonate   Fri Jun 07, 2013 10:50 pm

The personality is still copypasted from an earlier character. The problem wasn't that it was a shoddy copy-paste job, it's that it was a copypaste job in the first place. Come up with a new personality. I can't find the old profile anymore so I can't compare the histories side by side, but I remember the personality. I don't appreciate you trying to put one over on us like this.

_________________

Approved Missions:
D: 2
C: 3
B: 1
A: 0
S: 0

Rank-up points: 13

How Not to Write a Novel wrote:
Some writers are convinced that since great modern authors like Joyce and Faulkner are difficult to understand, writing that is difficult to understand is therefore great writing. This is a form of magical thinking, analogous to the belief that the warrior who dons the pelt of a lion thereby acquires its strength and cunning.
Back to top Go down
Hirano Arumi
Moderator
Moderator
avatar

Posts : 543

Ninja Info
Jutsu Tokens:
0/1  (0/1)

PostSubject: Re: River, Resonate   Fri Jun 07, 2013 11:19 pm

It's good that you made a different personality, but this is still a pretty one-dimensional character. He's not really a person, he's just a cardboard cutout with EVIL written on it. I leave it up to the others, but I can't give this my approval.

_________________

Approved Missions:
D: 2
C: 3
B: 1
A: 0
S: 0

Rank-up points: 13

How Not to Write a Novel wrote:
Some writers are convinced that since great modern authors like Joyce and Faulkner are difficult to understand, writing that is difficult to understand is therefore great writing. This is a form of magical thinking, analogous to the belief that the warrior who dons the pelt of a lion thereby acquires its strength and cunning.
Back to top Go down
Hideyoshi Senju
Admin
Admin
avatar

Posts : 329
Age : 24
Village : Soragakure No Sato
Rank : Kage

Ninja Info
Jutsu Tokens:
3/8  (3/8)

PostSubject: Re: River, Resonate   Sat Jun 08, 2013 1:31 am

Back to top Go down
Amaterasu
Queen of the site
Queen of the site
avatar

Posts : 785
Age : 26

Ninja Info
Jutsu Tokens:
2/8  (2/8)

PostSubject: Re: River, Resonate   Sat Jun 08, 2013 1:37 am

for future referance you can recycle a character persona or what its down to the rper if they want to do that or not I do it with my ninja as I like mixing and matching.

Approval 2/2 Temp till after the activity check.

_________________



" The hearts of men, woman and children are all that matters and there deaths mean nothing to me at all."
Back to top Go down
http://narutolandsofshinobi.pro-forum.co.uk
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: River, Resonate   

Back to top Go down
 
River, Resonate
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Aria watches the river rush by...
» Ipoko River.
» River Wyles
» Crystal River Academy of the Elements
» Red River Weyr

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Naruto Lands Of Shinobi  :: Creation Section :: Character Creation :: Approved Characters :: Approved Missing ninja and Shirotori Ninja-
Jump to:  
Member Awards

Of The Month

Become Praised

Thread
Thread
Latest topics
» Shinobi World War
Sat Oct 03, 2015 11:36 pm by kidbushido

» Naruto: Crisis 3.0
Tue Oct 07, 2014 12:21 pm by Agito

» Been A Long time
Mon Jun 16, 2014 12:14 pm by Amaterasu

» Naruto Nexus 3.0
Sat May 24, 2014 11:01 pm by Guest

» Pokemon Extinction
Wed Oct 23, 2013 1:14 am by Amaterasu

» NRPG
Wed Sep 25, 2013 5:36 pm by Hideyoshi Senju

» FinestShinobi [Naruto RP]
Sun Sep 22, 2013 5:04 am by Guest

» Chorus of Angels
Sun Sep 08, 2013 6:22 am by Auron Nakamura

» Auron's Adventure: Tag Wars
Sun Sep 08, 2013 6:16 am by Auron Nakamura

» Naruto World war (Affiliate)
Sat Sep 07, 2013 8:58 am by Sato Ace

Village Leader Ranks
Sokage : Closed
Suikage : Closed
Keukage: Closed
Donkage: Closed
Shirotori: Closed
Ratings

Language 3: Objectionable and mature language is permitted.
Sexual content 3: Sexual content may be described in detail.
Violence 3: Extreme violence is permitted
Affiliates
Creative Commons License
(c) Masashi Kishimoto - Naruto Creater and anything canon belongs to him and we do not take credit for his work. (c The site itself belongs to Naoko. All of the rules and templates belong to her and the staff who makes them. (c) All original ideas belong to their rightful users and not the site itself. The site has no ownership over the creations of the members and will not abuse their creations. Therefore, information may not be taken or used without their permission. Failing to abide is plagiarism. (c) Artwork- Kon, Google images. (c) Coding - Kon