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Village : Umigakure no Sato
Rank : S

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PostSubject: Tadashi Kira   Sat Jun 08, 2013 4:35 pm


❊ Tadashi Kira ❊




"A parallel world only brings parallel consequences"


Personal Information


NICKNAME(S): Kira, Tenseissun
AGE: 22
GENDER: Male
BLOOD TYPE: O-
VILLAGE: Umigakure no Sato
    VILLAGE RANK: Head Jounin
    SKILL RANK:S

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Appearance Information


HEIGHT: 5'10"
WEIGHT: 150 lbs
HAIR COLOR: Brown
EYE COLOR: Brown
MEASUREMENTS: All proportioned to a considerable degree.
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LOOKS DESCRIPTION:Kira has brown, shaggy hair. Since birth, it has seemed as though his hair has been his way of attracting females, thus he chooses not to cut it. Aside from this however, the rest of Kira's head seems plain as he has brown eyes, elf-like ears, and a somewhat-pointy nose. Additionally, his head is oval-shaped.

In terms of body structure, Kira has a slim, yet averagely muscular body. He prefers not to release it to the public as he feels it will only lead to seduction or unwanted attention. He keeps his upper and lower body hidden to all except those who are in deep relationships with him. Both his arms and legs stay thin but proportioned, his hands, feet, toes and fingers remaining relative to this structure (Example: Thin hands= Thin fingers, etc).

Kira's casual attire normally consists of his ancestor's cloak atop his undergarments. However, when in the moment of not having to use it, Kira wears a black muscle shirt, long grey shorts, and brown sandals. In cold environments, he wears a baggy white hoodie with red stripes along the side. Finally, when in cool environments, Kira will wear a dark grey cloak with black stripes along the side. In addition to his cloaks, he wears a black robe with a purple belt sash; a sash crafted for equipping weapons to.

Personality Information


PERSONALITY INFORMATION: Tadashi Kira is a very silent character, very blank character. From a third-person view, he seems to never express any emotion on his face, especially fear. When speaking, however, Kira chooses not to include any emphasis in his voice, seeing as his beliefs of the world are quite dark. These beliefs include the endless corruption that seems to envelop the planet, along with the insanity produced by human beings. As Kira does not wish to lead himself into a society like this, he remains sane, but quite odd at the same time.

In terms of academic intelligence, Kira was born gifted, his knowledge on life itself surpassing that of a normal human being. Kira can easily come up with theories on what leads to both a normal and abnormal human nature, something greatly reflected in his attitude. Alongside this, Kira is known for memorizing how human beings will react in certain situations, thus leaving himself out of most circumstances. His results on tests up until his present rank have seemed to show no flaws as his mind seems to think quite critically, referencing to the following aspects of knowledge:

- Theories
- Beliefs
- Predictions
- Assumptions
- Passive Knowledge
- Futuristic Knowledge
- Common Sense

These aspects complete the mind of Kira, allowing him to see beyond average cases, only to be reflected upon as he submits perfect results in his educational lifestyle. He continues to use these aspects to succeed in rigorous activity as well, such as the average-day combat that all shinobi are known to partake in.

Finally, to lead further into his physical state, Kira seems to use his own unique methods to achieve greater amounts of strength and potential. This can be seen as Kira enjoys utilizing opposing actions to create his own, this method being most likely to win a fight seeing as Kira's final results consist of both his opposition's strength along with his own. He can be referred to as a mirror in combat as he reflects upon opposing techniques and manipulates them to eliminate the obstacles before him. Although these methods seem to make Kira quite arrogant, he becomes careless of the matter, seeing as his success should only be his concern.

Overall, you can say Kira is a manipulator of time as it creates his whole being. All of his actions reflect on what he has seen and will foresee in the future. Kira's wishes are to manipulate the successes of others to form himself a greater path. He wishes to witness what seems to be rare to all others, that being hidden power. Using this power, Kira hopes to figure out the purpose that lies behind darkness, what lies behind death, and what lies behind the corrupted world we call Earth- things that seem impossible to surpass by an average mind.
LIKES: Silence, Peace, Liveliness, Growth, Power
DISLIKES: Noise, Destruction, Death, Corruption, Displeasure, Pain, Sorrow.
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NINDO: Kira follows by what seems to be the guidelines to a beautiful mind. These guidelines, however, are just his beliefs.


Equipment Information


NAME: Blessing of the Fuuton Sage
TYPE: Supplementary
APPEARANCE: A grey and black robe shown in the above picture of Kira
RANK: S
SPECIAL ABILITY: This unique robe serves as an immunity to Lightning Style techniques ranked C or lower. Despite this ability, however, the robe is only crafted well enough to use the immunity twice in battle.
ORIGIN: This robe was passed down by the Head of the Tadashi clan, one who was entitled as the "Elemental Sage". As generations passed, this robe was revised to suit whoever it was meant to be passed on to. As Kira received it, the robe memorized his main element and enhanced it as Kira would wear it during the day. As this robe is known as the "Blessing of the Suiton Sage", only the "Elemental Sage" has blessed it, making the powers behind it only to available to the members of the Tadashi clan. This robe became the remainder of the Tadashi clan's power, thus Kira stands clanless.

SIMPLE EQUIPMENT:

  • 20 Kunai
    20 Explosive Tags
    30 Mini Shuriken
    2 Weapon Belts (Capable of holding 50 kunai at once(or something equivalent in height and width))
    2 Katana
    2 Shuriken
    2 War Fans


Combat Information


CLAN: N/A
JUTSU SPECIALTIES:
    Main: Ninjutsu
    Sub: Genjutsu
    ELEMENTAL AFFINITY(S):
    Main: Fuuton (Wind)
    Sub:Katon(Fire), Paper

SPECIAL CHARACTERISTICS:
-Kira has learned to channel chakra at very fast paces, making him very dangerous when in close range.

-As Kira can easily memorize his surroundings, he is most likely able to find defenses, and at a considerably fast pace, making him quite an irritable opponent.

FLAWS/WEAKNESSES:
-Although able to memorize basic movements, close combat cannot always catch Kira's eyes as he falls weak in this category.

-His slightly slim body can be determined weak if having to fight people physically from a very close range. In fact, most of the time, Kira will lose in circumstances like this due to his lack of strength against average shinobi.

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Paper Release:

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History Information



HISTORY

Pre-Academy

Born with a wealthy family, Kira was raised as if he were the prince of a kingdom. Even as a baby, it was almost as if he were eating the finest of meat remade into baby food. As he grew up, he was constantly spoiled with gifts. Although living on the outskirts of the village, it was almost as if Kira owned the village himself. However, these were only his toddler moments. By the time he reached the age of 7, Kira realized the true purpose behind what he was given. In comparison to his toddler days, always being in his room, this was indeed the objective sent from his family. These gifts were distractions so Kira would always be busy, his family never home to witness his joy. Thankfully, at this time, Kira knew how to communicate with others to a decent extent. He eventually used the ryo his parents would leave to hire chefs, teachers, and guidance counselors. With these three groups of people, Kira learned to live a life on his own, even at a very small age. He learned to cook, how to study highly advanced subjects, and gained a great perspective on his future.

By the age of 9, before Kira felt ready to enter the village of Umigakure, he had realized that his hired teachers, chefs and counselors were constantly living with him, all for unknown purposes. It had seemed as though these people were now under the control of his parents. In fact, in only a short matter of time, Kira saw himself living alone once more, having no access to the same people. He would have to hire new parents to take care of him. His new parents had treated him like an average boy until he turned 10, only to leave him permanently.

Having been exhausted from loneliness, Kira had decided to enter Umigakure before receiving a sudden call. It had seemed as though his original parents had always been in a dealership with crooks, crooks that had found a way to buyout Kira's property. They would blackmail his parents, having them kill innocent people to keep their property. The sudden call had indicated that his parents finally gave up their job, committing suicide as they were wanted by too many people. Having known that he was in trouble at such a young age, Kira only managed to escape his neighborhood with his regular clothing, food that he had cooked himself, and the cloak passed on to him through his ancestors. Kira could remember seeing his house explode by the crooks, even from the village gates of Umigakure.

Academy

Kira could remember first entering the village by having sparred with a guard. He could remember manipulating the guard's actions to have him defeated by his own techniques, along with the combat training solely done by Kira himself. Unlike most shinobi, having to be accepted by one of high status, Kira received an especial entry into the village, able to open himself to more opportunity than usual. Using all the opportunities given, Kira was able to gain the gifted education he still has today. His usage of psychology, biology, chemistry, physics, mathematics, and exercise science; all of these studies have led Kira to becoming a new person (his current person, if you may).

It was only a matter of time before Kira had successfully passed his Genin exam, having been an Academy Student for only a short period of time. His art of using all jutsu provided into a collaborating performance had him graduate from the academy at a fairly quick pace. Although graduated, Kira sometimes returns to the academy to visit his Sensei, wishing to learn some lessons that aren't always taught to regular shinobi.

Genin

Frankly his hardest mission, Kira saw himself surrounded by a huge amount of fellow Genin during this time, all wishing to surpass his skills as they had recognized him during his academy times. He could remember being challenged everyday to a spar, having to fight to his limits before surrendering due to exhaustion. He could remember being mocked by those who fortunate enough to catch him off-guard, but those fools failed to realize how difficult it is to fight half-baked. Kira soon proved this theory right as he would constantly improve his strength, returning only to fight those he surrendered to, and winning within mere moments. It didn't take much even for Kira to be defeated as he had still yet to fully master certain jutsu. Thankfully, as someone of high status had recognized his skills and improvement, he was invited to the Chuunin exams.

The Chuunin exams proved to be his most sorrowful times as Kira could remember being forced to kill fellow shinobi. Luckily, these shinobi were wanted beforehand by the village, so killing them wasn't really considered a punishment before the village name. His constant encounters proved to be even more challenging as Kira learned how to maintain balance during the exam, even while exhausted. He learned to utilize techniques into last resort comebacks, able to defeat enemies by surprise.

As the journey to surpassing fellow shinobi had concluded, Kira could remember finding himself in another position, this position having to rescue a fellow shinobi by a possible, life-threatening disaster. This was the sorrowful moment behind the exam as requirements were manipulated, Kira's assigned team put in much danger as he could remember seeing a teammate sacrifice himself for the successful rescuing of the lost shinobi. Kira always keeps fantasies of this shinobi in his mind, influenced by his selflessness. Memories used to cloud his mind constantly as he could remember being in a psychotic state, having put himself into a temporal house arrest, even as a newly entitled Chuunin.

Chuunin

The most ridiculous times in Kira's records. The last Tadashi could remember having to constantly train others to their limits, as well as fighting to his limits to protect them. It was a lot of hard work, having to drive himself above and beyond the call everyday, but it was worthwhile. Although these shinobi were Academy Students, Kira could remember seeing Genin out of these people, one of the only times he actually felt proud of someone, someone he would care about for eternity.

Fortunate times had come as Kira had realized there were no Jounin exams before him. It was all a matter of being invited to claim this position. Kira could remember being on the opposite side of the table during these times, what was once him training others was now him being trained by shinobi of higher status. His skillful knowledge hardly made him lose spars during these times, but also without a successful victory. Kira could remember having to train in the Training Grounds, daily as he now saw himself working hard, merely to defeat one shinobi. During these times, however, Kira had forgotten how important his collaboration techniques were, low-ranked techniques becoming equivalent to what seemed to be the arts of elite shinobi. Kira could remember how surprised he was to realize this single point. In fact, during this next battle, Kira could remember using these collaboration techniques to give his opponent a hard time to sense where he was. It was one of the most intense fights Kira had ever partaken in, but he could remember hurting himself in order to defeat the shinobi he had always lost to, his body hardly able to stand higher than his opposition. It was during this time that he had been invited for a new title.

Jounin

Definitely the shortest time period in Kira's lifetime. As Kira had been invited to this position, he was expected to train hard everyday, to submit magnificent results to his new Sensei, and nothing less. He was to take his regular Fire and Wind Style techniques, and utilize them into an even greater power. At first, Kira figured his Sensei wanted him to focus more on these techniques separately. However, little did he know, his Sensei was actually expecting an advanced element, a newly formed conjuring effect known as Paper Release. Kira could remember constantly failing his tests as his Sensei became angrier by the day. It came to an eventual point that his Sensei finally wanted to challenge him, his point of anger wanting Kira demoted. It was during this time that both Kira and his Sensei became enraged, Kira's last technique being that of an unintentional Paper Release. He had struck his Sensei so hard that he had unintentionally disintegrated him to the core. He could remember how painful it was to witness such a thing. Thankfully, he could remember foreseeing his Sensei return somehow, managing to recuperate from the technique, but having eternal bruises in the process- still able to smile towards Kira in relief. Although his Sensei could no longer fight for himself, he was proud to see a new Kira, granting him a spot like no other, the Head Jounin, one capable of going beyond expectations at all times in his books. Kira had become influenced by his Sensei as he continued to conquer those of high class, referring to his Sensei every time he won, to fear him although paralyzed. Today, Kira's Sensei, along with his fellow Chuunin were his only friends. He learned that as a Head Jounin, other than being arrogant with his skills, he would have to utilize them for the sake of his fellow shinobi, to work to his fullest extent so others could grow. From this day onward, Kira continues to secretly work with his pupils, to give them more opportunity in reference to his.


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Another sunny and humid day in Sunagakure. No surprise there. The heat came down on the village inhabitants, the sun already having established a high position in the sky. Wasn't anything unfamiliar, most of them were used to it. What makes this day so significant however is the fact that it is the day that Jun learns his first C-Rank technique. Unknowingly to him, the Kage Buyo move which he had been aiming to learn for weeks now would finally become his. Its existence had been introduced to him through his father, one who was also a frequent user of Goken and who had already mastered the technique. The degree of difficulty that performing this move presented was enough to shoo away anyone who wasn't willing to physically exert themselves and train ruthlessly for, possibly even beyond their known limits. Jun's reason and motivation in deciding to pursue rather than avoid it wasn't only because he had already made the decision to become a Taijutsu specialist. It was also because the usage of C-Ranked techniques amongst new Genin was rare. By possessing one in his arsenal he would be able to further the gap between himself and his classmates. This was only another stepping stone to him in achieving his goal to become one of the world's strongest individuals.

There he stood in his backyard, the same place he had been frequenting for the past week. The entire space had been cemented over, and stood empty except for Jun and his training tools. The backyard was vacant which made it the ideal place for someone to practice as it served as nothing but open space. Already warmed up and ready to go, Jun decided it was time to resume his training. A few yards in front of him stood a tan-colored, worn punching bag. The objective layed out to him by his father was to knock the punching bag in the air high enough through one attack so that he gave himself sufficient time to perform the Kage Buyo. Obviously as he got quicker and more familiar with the technique he would need less time to gather himself. Next was to quickly analyze the position of the bag in the sky and place himself midair directly beneath it while holding a specific distance between himself and the victim. The reason this technique presented a high level difficulty to Jun was because he wasn't yet able to correctly place himself underneath the bag after punching or kicking it high into the air. On previous attempts he ended up too close to the bag which by his father's warning meant he was vulnerable to counterattack, or he was too far and out of attacking range from the bag.

Jun stood the bag up in place by holding on to an attached strap with his left hand, while he brought his right fist back in preparation to strike. Following this was the forward motion of his right hand as it continued on to strike the bag with a strong uppercut. The impact of his punch sent the bag soaring into the air, and Jun gathered himself and scanned the sky for its new position. "Got it." He launched himself into the air and put himself beneath the bag. What surprised him and almost ultimately lead to him failing to perform the technique was that he had gotten the correct position on his first attempt. Before it was too late, Jun gripped onto another attached strap on the bag and brought it to his body to hold before the descent began. After landing on the ground, his pleasure was evident on the smirk seen on his face. He knew that he wouldn't be able to perform it 100% every single time any time soon, but was reassured by the fact that he now knew he was capable of doing it correctly. With that he continued to train it so that he could perfect the technique, the knowledge of how it feels when doing it proper now aiding him.
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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Sun Jun 09, 2013 12:03 am

Firstly, why are his legs 12 inches long? That seems a bit short for someone of his height.

The Flying Thunder God technique is banned, as is space-time ninjutsu.

Storm ninjutsu is a KKG for the Sutomu Clan of Soragakure. You also have two limited abilities, the Chidori and the Great Shark Bullet, so you will either have to drop the storm release or drop one of your limiteds. If you do keep the storm release, you will have to be in Soragakure, which doesn't currently have an open Head Jounin spot.

I'm not so sure about having an SC that makes you immune to such a wide range of jutsu. That seems more the territory of a temporary jutsu than a permanent characteristic.

Other things seem mostly alright, but you might want to fill out your jutsu list. S-ranks can start out with 36 jutsu, 2 S and 34 lower. Once we remove the banned abilities and the extra limited, that brings you down to only 6.

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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Sun Jun 09, 2013 2:05 am

Alright. Still in progress. May I reserve the Head Jounin spot though?
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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Sun Jun 09, 2013 2:08 am

Spots are given on a first-ready basis, though it's unlikely someone will gank it from you.

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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Sun Jun 09, 2013 5:55 pm

Legs still seem a bit short, but then again you don't really need that measurement at all. We assume characters are proportional unless stated otherwise.

His weaknesses should come from him, not his cloak. Any weakness that can be nullified by taking your shirt off isn't balanced.

Dust release is a limited ability, and already claimed. You should really check the limited and banned ability lists. You also are listing 4 elements, with the 4th being advanced. That's a kage thing. A-S ranks are allowed 3 elements, with the third being advanced.

Fūton: Hanachiri Mai is listed twice, as is the hiding in fire technique.

The Koukyango no jutsu is also on the banned list.

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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Sun Jun 09, 2013 6:58 pm

Where did you find this info on Dust Release? I have checked the Banned and Limited and it says [0/1]

Albeit, I will inform you when the above is fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Sun Jun 09, 2013 7:08 pm

It's on the Limited Abilities list, currently taken by Kyuuzou. It has been for quite some time. Where did it say it was open?

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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Sun Jun 09, 2013 8:02 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Sun Jun 09, 2013 8:04 pm

That was an oversight while updating the list. It's actually been claimed for longer than I've been here.

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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Sun Jun 09, 2013 8:53 pm

Updated and ready for another review.
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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Sun Jun 09, 2013 8:57 pm

For Crystal Release, you need Water as your primary element and Earth as your secondary. This is listed in the Advanced Elements thread under the rules.

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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Sun Jun 09, 2013 9:20 pm

look at your crystal release and add ranges for them all.

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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Mon Jun 10, 2013 9:16 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Mon Jun 10, 2013 9:34 pm

Get rid of the FTG kunai and separate the SCs and weaknesses into their own things, easier to keep track of that way.

For the Planetary Paper technique, disintegrating someone's body seems like a bit much for a B-rank jutsu.

Paper Prison of God is banned.


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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Mon Jun 10, 2013 9:56 pm

- Planetary Paper Technique promoted to A-Rank

Otherwise, fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Mon Jun 10, 2013 10:02 pm

I'm not sure about the disintegration techniques, I'll have to get a second opinion on those.

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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Mon Jun 10, 2013 10:04 pm

Sounds good.

I figured it'd be necessary seeing as normally, paper would just cut through someone. However, it'd be unique if chakra-enhanced paper could disintegrate someone completely. Despite this, however, I still respect your opinion.
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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Mon Jun 10, 2013 10:06 pm

In canon, paper ninjutsu was used for cutting or stabbing attacks, or to conceal explosive tags. The disintegration seems like it's stepping on the toes of Dust Release.

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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Mon Jun 10, 2013 10:07 pm

Alright. Will remake into cuts then.
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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Mon Jun 10, 2013 10:24 pm

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  • Uo the age 18 and S rank No
  • Add LOOKS DESCRIPTION a paragraph
  • NAME: Blessing of the Fuuton Sage
    TYPE: Supplementary
    APPEARANCE: A grey and black robe shown in the above picture of Kira
    RANK: S
    SPECIAL ABILITY: This unique robe has seals contained inside its sleeves. Using these seals, Kira can manipulate where a Wind Style technique can hit. Also, by channeling chakra through this robe, Kira can double the speed and strength of any Wind Style technique he chooses, allowing for better results.

    Lower this serious doubling everything No. This process what ever the level of manipulation will cause the seals to use chakra.

  • In terms of body positioning, Kira has eyes like a hawk. Even without a doujutsu, Kira has learned to memorize muscle movements, thus he can predict moves swiftly. Too sharingan remove or change.
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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Mon Jun 10, 2013 11:13 pm

  • Age changed to 22
    Three paragraphs added to LOOKS DESCRIPTION.
    Blessing of the Fuuton Sage's ability changed.
    SPECIAL CHARACTERISTIC changed.
    Jutsu Names Converted to English
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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Tue Jun 11, 2013 1:50 am

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I've looked it over a few times, and it seems like everything is fixed. So I'm giving it my half of the approval. You still need another~
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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Tue Jun 11, 2013 2:57 am

Name: Fire Release: Great Fire Annihilation
Rank: A
Requirements: N/A
Type:Ninjutsu
Description:
A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range as well. This makes the technique extremely difficult to either avoid or contain, with it requiring the combined efforts of several Water Release users in order to extinguish the flames.

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Name: Great Sickel Weasel Technique
Rank: B
Requirements: N/A
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: This technique is a more powerful version of the Sickle Weasel Technique: many air currents collide to create vacuum pockets that slashes the opponents, with enough power to slice down many trees in a forest. This technique can deflect both physical and sound wave attacks and attack at the same time, making it both an offensive and defensive technique.


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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Tue Jun 11, 2013 3:05 am

War Fans added to Equipment for Great Sickel Weasel. Great Fire Annihilation promoted to S-Rank. Other jutsu remade to appropriate ranks.
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PostSubject: Re: Tadashi Kira   Tue Jun 11, 2013 10:41 pm

Approved, 2.2!
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