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Kazume Kimura



Posts : 25
Age : 35
Village : Kemurigakure no Sato
Rank : ANBU Captain

PostSubject: Kimura Kazume   Tue Jun 11, 2013 7:18 am


❊ Kimura Kazume ❊



Personal Information


NICKNAME(S): N/A
AGE: 30
GENDER: Female
BLOOD TYPE: O+
VILLAGE: Kemurigakure
    VILLAGE RANK:ANBU Captain
    SKILL RANK: A

EXTRAS: N/A

Appearance Information


HEIGHT: 5’5”
WEIGHT: 130 lbs
HAIR COLOR: Brown
EYE COLOR: Blue
MEASUREMENTS: D cup chest
LOOKS DESCRIPTION: She is about five foot five inches and about one hundred and thirty pounds. She has silky, brown hair that goes down to the bottom of her back. She has sapphire blue eyes that seem to hypnotize those that look into it. She has about a D cup chest and is curvy around the hips. She has a blue jacket that is usually zipped up about mid-way up her chest. She usually wears a fishnet shirt underneath, however at times she wears a blue sleeveless shirt that goes to a little above her belly button. She usually wears short, blue shorts underneath a knee length blue skirt. She also wears shinobi shoes like most jonin. She keeps a katana in a sheath that is attached to a belt around her waist. She has a weapons pouch on her right hip and sometimes keep weapons in her pockets inside her jacket.

Personality Information


PERSONALITY INFORMATION: She is a calm, and normally hard to anger woman. It takes a lot to even bug her slightly. She is known for being a brilliant tactician. She is extremely loyal to Kemurigakure and its people. As such, she only does what is right to help the citizens and members of this village. She is ambitious and aspiring, always trying to expand his knowledge and power, trying to become a better, stronger shinobi.
She is caring and courteous, always stopping to help someone who is injured or in need of help. She is friendly, kind, and honest. She is a valuable friend and teammate to anyone he talks to. She is mature and punctual, always on time and never acting selfish or immature. She is also very protective over the Keukage. She is annoyed by people who can't do things for themselves.
If someone pisses her off, then run to the hills cause she gets extremely angry and will kill everything who even slightly annoys her. She also tends to refer to guys as though they were girls. She leads in all cases and never lets herself get pushed aside.
LIKES: She likes kids, her sister, wolves, and having fun.
DISLIKES: She dislikes assholes, pigs (no idea why), and enemies of Kemurigakure
CATCH PHRASE(S): N/A
NINDO: “I fight to protect all that I hold dear.”


Equipment Information


NAME: Katana
TYPE: Bladed
APPEARANCE: A simple Katana
RANK: D
SPECIAL ABILITY: None
ORIGIN: It was made in the fires of Mount Doom….nah sister bought it and gave it to her.

SIMPLE EQUIPMENT:
  • Kunai
  • Basic Ninja Scrolls
  • Shuriken
  • Trip wires
  • Needles


Combat Information


CLAN: N/A
JUTSU SPECIALTIES:
    Main: Ninjutsu
    Sub: Medical Jutsu, Taijutsu

ELEMENTAL AFFINITY(S):
    Main: Fire
    Sub: Water, Lightning

SPECIAL CHARACTERISTICS: Advanced Chakra Control
FLAWS/WEAKNESSES: Weakness to Kenjutsu (20-30% more damage)

Jutsu Information


Academy Jutsu:
 

Raiton
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Katon
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Suiton
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Taijutsu/Other
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History Information



HISTORY
Pre-Genin Arc:
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Genin Arc:
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Chunin Arc:
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Jonin Arc:
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ANBU Arc:
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Miscellaneous Information


RP SAMPLE
Baiko sat, gathering chakra for the coming battle. "I need to bring forth everything I got in order to destroy that pathetic village and that pathetic Seikage." He sighed as he slowly rose to his feet. He looked to his wife as she nodded. "The hour has begun. No longer shall that village live within its precious mist. Today, Seireiashigakure no Sato falls at our hands." He began his hands signs as he made his jutsu ready. "Summoning Art: Souls of the Damned. Summoning Art: Bones of the Deceased. Summoning Art: Zombie Apocalypse." He placed his hand to the ground as thousands of zombies, skeletons and wraiths rose from the ground. "Now for the finishing touch. Hell Release: Bijuu Skeletons." He placed his hand to the ground and smirked. Each of the nine Bijuu in skeleton form rose from the ground behind him. He began laughing maniacally as his wife giggled. "March my army. March towards Seireiashi and destroy all who stand in your way!!" He and his wife walked side by side on their march to Seireiashi. The army marched and slowly destroyed every tree, animal, and person in their way until nothing was left but their target and a lone man standing in front of it. "Zap Fosho, Seikage of the Hidden Spirits. Today is your last day. Prepare yourself." He looked throughout his army. "Attack my army! Leave no one standing."
OTHER DETAILS:
FACE CLAIM N/A
ROLE PLAYER'S NAME Zap Fosho
PASSWORD Gedo Mazou


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PostSubject: Re: Kimura Kazume   Tue Jun 11, 2013 7:45 am

Looks mostly good, but the Strong Arm is a form of Chakra-enhanced strength. For that, you need advanced chakra control as an SC and to have Tai as your main spec. There's also the phrase for the character at the top, that should be filled in or just remove the placeholder.

I also counted 50 jutsu, out of the 36 that are allowed for ANBU captains. You'll have to trim it down a bit.

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Kazume Kimura



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Village : Kemurigakure no Sato
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PostSubject: Re: Kimura Kazume   Tue Jun 11, 2013 7:56 am

Fixed all of it.
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PostSubject: Re: Kimura Kazume   Tue Jun 11, 2013 8:02 am

Change Gaijutsu to something broader like weaponry, or more common like kenjutsu. Give a percentage for the weakness and then we're good to go.

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PostSubject: Re: Kimura Kazume   Tue Jun 11, 2013 8:07 am

Besides, what Hira stated a few things should be fixed. These are mostly minor details, but I rather you get accustomed to dos and don'ts now rather than later.

  • You didn't state a blood type for your character.
  • There are two occurences of "Konoha" within your app, and the site doesn't use the canon villages, so replace those.
  • Please put "N/A" in any non-applicable spots. Such as other details, extras, special characteristics, etc.
  • Fix your jutsu specialties - your subs are on the wrong line.
  • Provide a better RP sample. The one you have is not up to quality or quantity, and I would rather it is since this is your first character - be noted you won't have to do this for any further characters.
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Kazume Kimura



Posts : 25
Age : 35
Village : Kemurigakure no Sato
Rank : ANBU Captain

PostSubject: Re: Kimura Kazume   Tue Jun 11, 2013 8:59 pm

Got everything I believe.
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PostSubject: Re: Kimura Kazume   Tue Jun 11, 2013 10:23 pm

Approved 1/2

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PostSubject: Re: Kimura Kazume   Tue Jun 11, 2013 10:44 pm

2/2

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