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PostSubject: Just a small Assault [Open; DA]   Wed Jun 12, 2013 5:31 am

Near, a god that seemed to live at high points to hone his own skill. He loved by his arts and loved by his hate. The young man's clone had reached the village and found himself in a great spot to start his assault. As he hit the ground he made an impact that frightened the many around him, causing them to scatter in fear of the man. As he looked to find one of the few places that held the village together. His plan was to pop the bubble and had it been done before a ninja attacked him, then greatness would come to his name.

Near grabbed the weapon from his back and began to run. As he sliced up the humans that stood in his way and left their blood to be spilled on the ground that they once stood on. "Time for you all to die an untimely death! You stupid pieces of shits!" Near yelled as he made it closer to the first bubble. He was ready for anything, as he could feel them lurking, ready to strike him down. His first movement would ready his next jutsu, whether it would be to destroy or hinder was his choice.

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PostSubject: Re: Just a small Assault [Open; DA]   Wed Jun 12, 2013 6:28 am

The alarm rang out sending the village into a scrambled as villagers and genin headed to the safely points as Jonin and ANBU headed to head off the intruder. Shiro flashed stepped to a building over looking the fight a mere 15m above, watching only a moment before rapidity weaving hand signs rabidly chilling the air and filling it with a thick mist. With second set she formed several needle sending them after the missing-nin. This was very bad. She knew this ninja's face from the Bingo book, he was a left over from Raiukagure. Why he was here she had no idea.

She drew her sword, spinning the color to to white, making it glow faintly, as she formed a second set of hand signs utilizing her KKG. With a thought quick thought she launched her jutsu freezing the water in the air creating deadly spike where she felt the missing-nin to be. A split secound later she jumped down five meters in front of him sword at the ready and glowing. Some how she just knew this was going to be difficult.

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PostSubject: Re: Just a small Assault [Open; DA]   Wed Jun 12, 2013 6:40 am

Kazume had just finished her mission to Umigakure when she looked up at all the commotion. "What's going on? This has to be bad." She ran in as she witnessed the young woman unleash her attack. "I better be ready. I know this guy from the Bingo Book." She began to concentrate her chakra. "Chameleon Jutsu." She slowly walked up, invisible to almost everyone in the area as she prepared her next move. "Today will mark the end." She sighed, keeping herself out of hearing range. She examined the man, sensing the chakra within the body. "Something's not right. There isn't nearly as much chakra as there should be. It's a god damn clone." She sighs, placing her hands to the floor of the dome. "Pretty much everyone with chakra and probably a lot of fish will be hit by this. "Should be able to get rid of any clones. This is gonna hurt me just as much. Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder." With this jutsu, she sends out a electric current through the water. While it can't hit every bubble, it does hit the two nearest and the one its in. She cringes as she feels the slight current move through here. "That's gonna hurt some genin."

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PostSubject: Re: Just a small Assault [Open; DA]   Wed Jun 12, 2013 8:25 am

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PostSubject: Re: Just a small Assault [Open; DA]   Wed Jun 12, 2013 8:51 am

[[OOC MODPOST]]

Since this was supposed to be a clone all along, the OP has been edited to reflect that. If you need to edit your posts accordingly, do so.

In future, I don't want to see any of this metagaming again. Give accurate information in the texts of your posts so that players can react accordingly. Don't pull a bait-and-switch like this.

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PostSubject: Re: Just a small Assault [Open; DA]   Wed Jun 12, 2013 11:49 am

[Time for the Sage to appear]

The blaring sounds of the sirens from outside of his cold home blared loudly, the young boys body stirring towards the beginning of something of such a destructive scale that had even the higher level ninja to scramble through the village. It was at one point where his face was getting pawed at by a small figured wolf that Kuroi had woken up, the still blaring sounds of the Siren going off," An attack....AN ATTACK!! Dammit and i just got back home to," almost instantly he would jump out of the bed and grab his sleeveless black shirt.

To add on to the ensemble of clothing, he through on an over jacket, this as well was sleeveless, but etched on the back was " the wolf sage" with a jagged wolf claw. The Umigakure Head band was attached to his forehead, smiling as he quickly walked out of the house, seeing one of his clansmen," You there go and get everyone and i mean everyone and spread them out amongst the village. Help get people out and if need be protect and fight, You are also to assist Shiro in case she needs the support, nothing goes wrong with this and everything goes right now go and scatter the ice amongst the world," the man with only a nod disappeared in a puff of snow as Kuroi ran to try and help.

Although he was in the main bubble which housed the Suikage Quarters and the main part of the village, he was already hearing reports that an attack was being done on the outer bubbles, three to be exact. Sighing he would see this as an opportunity for his talents to come to use, so running forward he would be surrounded by three of the oldest Korinohono," Now let us get down to business. Tomagachi you go to squad one and protect the first bubble and go now. Kotomine you take the second squad and protect that. Finally Kiritsugu you are coming with me to the last bubble and we are going to stop anything that happens there. We are Umigakure no Sato's last hope now go," the two of them quickly dispersed and headed to their designated areas with haste.

Kuroi and Kiritsugu had arrived to the outskirts of the third bubble, seeing the damage that had already been done and holy fuck. Kiritsugu had seen the team trying to stop the massive influx of water. Although the influx of water was more than the three man  squad, Kuroi and Kiritsugu were the top of the clan hierarchy. The first to help was Kiritsugu would had jumped in the front and performed the Frozen Flame technique, dispersing it from his mouth just like the others, freezing the water dead in its tracks. However due to the pressure of the water the ice continued to crack. Within  minutes of the clansman fell to the water, dying soon after.

Kuroi had watched from the  building located 20 meters from the area, seeing the presence of his clansman fade into nothing. Grinning his teeth he would jump down and yell," We do not run, we stand and fight. We do not let a comrade fall and we will not do so now. Get your asses in gear and stop this fucking water," Kuroi's voice had changed into his more battle driven side as his facial features changed. His ice blue eyes became slitted with a black pupil, his nails becoming longer. Kuroi's teeth became sharper and longer, the last to change was his ears," Now get your asses in gear and lets stop this," with one swift hand sign a frozen flame would be shot from his mouth.

The frozen flame would soon begin to slowly freeze the water, although the water was rushing more than he could stop. Suddenly his eyes would change into that of the sharingan, only two tomoe were present as he continued to hold the water back," Nu uh this shit ain't happening. This is my home and i will not let it perish," almost as if they were on cue three more streams of fire would hit the water, making the water freeze faster as the seal would open area and almost had frozen the whole dome as Kuroi stood and panted heavily. His eyes soon turned back to their wolfish form as he looked around," Team one and two what is the progress," A few crackles of static before they responded," Team one has successfully stopped the water awaiting further orders. Team two has just successfully stopped the water awaiting further orders," with a smile the next set would soon be given," Alright Team one assist the villagers in getting to the safe zone. Team two go and find Shiro and support her in anyway she needs it," Kuroi was heading off to the main  bubble to make sure everything was safe.

Kiritusu and the team stayed behind to strengthen the seal and search for any survivors while dealing with any excess water.  So far the crisis that would have destroyed a portion of village could have been gone. Now he was going to protect the main bubble, making sure his cousin had something to return to. Mentally slapping himself, he changed the frequency to that of the ANBU channel  (No one knows how he got this) and spoke," Shiro the water has been stopped, where the hell are you. I sent a team to come to you, just in case of support so use them how you may. I need to stay here and protect our home," he smiled as he hopped on one of the buildings,"  the Ice Wolf sage has arrived."

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PostSubject: Re: Just a small Assault [Open; DA]   Wed Jun 12, 2013 7:20 pm

Hate to do this, but another OOC mod post. Listen up, Near.

1: Water Clones only have the water elemental affinity, they're limited to water for elemental ninjutsu.

2: You had 3 clones simultaneously use a jutsu that can only be used once every three posts. That's a no-go.

3: That's a hell of a lot to do before giving anyone a chance to respond. You blow up a house, breach 3 domes, use water ninjutsu to flood them, AND retreat to a safe distance all in one post.

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PostSubject: Re: Just a small Assault [Open; DA]   Wed Jun 12, 2013 8:38 pm

I have a idea since this topic is a bundle of mess in the first place mistakes are all over to put simple you have three choices:
1.Make edits suggested by Arumi Near
2.Restart the thread from the beginning
3.Void the topic as if nothing happened

Btw Zap hun your post make a little to no sense due to the fact the clones weren't made yet due to Near having to edit etc just pointing that it there

I leave the choice to the participants if they can't decide I will
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PostSubject: Re: Just a small Assault [Open; DA]   Wed Jun 12, 2013 8:42 pm

OOC: I vote void it unless Near wants to restart
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PostSubject: Re: Just a small Assault [Open; DA]   Wed Jun 12, 2013 8:43 pm

OOC: just void it
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PostSubject: Re: Just a small Assault [Open; DA]   Thu Jun 13, 2013 3:38 am

OOC: I vote void. This thread is confusing me at this point. And my post was after the clone announcement. That's why its that way.
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PostSubject: Re: Just a small Assault [Open; DA]   Thu Jun 13, 2013 3:55 am

Majority Asked for the Void...I claim this topic Voided and removed from timeline Locked
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