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PostSubject: Partheonpaeus, Acheron   Mon Jun 17, 2013 10:11 am



Acheron Parthenopaeus
 


Reality is Illusory.

basic information

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Nicknames: Snow, Ash, Parth
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Blood Type: O
Village: Shirotori
Village Rank: A
Skill Rank: A

physical information

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Acheron Parthenopaeus is a man that stands at a height of about five foot ten inches. His purple hair it's self is about three feet long proving to stop around his lower back area as his legs are a bit longer than his torso proving his forte to be more so speed than the strength that comes with top heaviness. To hold the hair back and keep it from interfering from hindering his vision, Ash wears a white head band in the place of his normal village headband. His normal one is worn around his right arm under the purple coat that he wears at all times. Said coat is adorned with white diamonds along it placed in a formation that if seen from a great distance would be noted to those who knew his clan and their symbol to be the very same one just in a very different color. 


Ash's eyes are a light purple that seem to glisten a bright silver when shone in the light of the sun and a pale white in the light of the moon. The coat he wears seems to be close to skin tight on his arms and torso sporting the amount of toned muscle that he has although his body is lean, not having much bulk for whatever reason. Acheron wears a black necklace made of what appears to be string, but is actually a black wire that he uses to house several charms that was given to him by his father. Each charm is said to be from one of the medical ninja of the senju clan's past and are there not only for protection, but to channel the skills of those that came before the wearer. The last of his ensamble are two twin kata that are also heirlooms


    Height: 5'11
    Weight: 175
    Measurements: Not on the first date~


personality information

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---Acheron, while only seventeen, has several ways about him that most adults or rather older people wouldn't have yet developed. He has an air about him that seems to be mostly serious while that isn't very true. His serious nature lies mostly dormant in most situations only coming out during a fight, mission, or any other situation that requires he drop the, very fake, friendly act and get down to immediate business. In times of peril or in any situation where most would show fear, anger, hesitation, or sadness Acheron can and most likely will keep a very cool head to fully asses and understand what is going on. His father's first lesson of life to him was that anyone ninja or regular person that could not keep their head on their shoulders was useless to everyone around them and would only get more people than themselves hurt or killed. 


This was a harsh but necesary lesson for young Acheron to learn and his love for helping others also was spurred from it. Those few words from his father shaped the entirety of the male's personality and his choice in career, ie becoming a ninja and in turn one that specializes in medicine and the medical arts. When around those he considers friends Acheron seems to be more easy going than not proving that his stoic face during missions can be morphed into that of a teenager who doesn't seem to have the weight of his family on his shoulders. As far as relationships go the young shinobi has never had a single girlfriend or kiss for that matter as he feared that such actions would deter him from his goals and that was unacceptable. All in all the young man is more of a normality than anyone could realize. 


The truth to it all was that Acheron was a down to earth kinda guy with an arrogant air that fitted most under the umbrella of Uchiha, but he was not one to be swept under the rug and laid with the rest of the people in a group. As a youth he realized that he was handsome and that didn't stop him from not taking it all to the head and becoming a monsterous asshole that most expected him to be. He was infact the exact opposite and hated fighting unless there was a real reason before him, but he couldn't help but thing as he fluttered through the pages of the book that it had some truth behind it. He was a medical pro who made choices that most wouldn't but again that was a hinderance that was taken too far by the imaginative butler. He always was one to blow things out of proporting, but that wasn't something that the young man lingered on. Like most things in this world he let it be if it wasn't of immediate importance to his mission or to him and the book of a butler that was over exaggerated wasn't. 


    Sexuality: Hetero
    Likes:

    • Reading
    • Calamity
    • Peace

    Dislikes:

    • Irrationality
    • Idiocy
    • Impracticality 


Clan: Uchiha
Ninja Specialization:

    Main: Fuuinjutsu
    Sub: Ninjutsu

Elemental Specialization:

    Main: Lightning
    Sub: Fire | Wind

Strengths:

  • Can weave seals and preform jutsu single handedly
  • Was born with an elemental affinity for fire and lightning.
  • Extremely large chakra pool(30% Increase)

Weaknesses:

  • Is mentally unstable to the point where certain words or phrases, known to be ordinary day to day sayings, could make him flip and attack most allies without remorse. 
  • Being Born with two elemental affinities as a base removed the option of more than one being learned through normal means as he progressed.
  • 30% decrease in strength



INVENTORY
Simple Equipment:

  • Kunai
  • Shuriken
  • Wire (excesses)
  • Two Ceremonial Katana (black steel chakra nature compatible)
  • Smoke bombs
  • Sealing and Summoning Scrolls


WIND TECHNIQUES:
 

LIGHTNING TECHNIQUES:
 

FIRE TECHNIQUES:
 

OTHER TEHCNIQUES:
 

historical information
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Similar to all other ninja and in turn persons Acheron had to have been born. The joining of two chuunin, one a kirigakure woman and the other a konoha senju, is what lead to the birth of this young man. The first year of his life was spent under the care of both of his loving parents within the village hidden in the leaves where his father was born although Acheron's birth place remains a secret even to him. His first year of life, although not memorable to him due to being an infant, was quite uneventful. Everyday the same routine proved dominant over his young life. Awake, suckle his mother's bosom for sustenance, the receiving of cleaning, and of course sleep. These were the relatively good days of his life and those came to a sever end on the first anniversary of his death. The blood spilled changed everything.

The first event that proved unfortunate for the young Mr. Parthenopaeus was the arrival of a tracker ninja. It was one sent by the mizukage in an attempt to retrieve Acheron's mother. Normally that wouldn't be a problem for the woman, but the fact that her guard was down and that she was looking for the young male who had waddled off in some odd direction left her abnormally open. Like many other days in Konohagakure it was sunny, warm, vibrant, but there was some type of chill in the forest that even the most hardened of men couldn't shake. The toddler that waddled about couldn't have noticed but he was being stalked by a predator, a ninja that knew who he was and how to use him for what he wanted. A baby, what sane man would use a baby you ask? None other than Taki Shujiko, execution extrodinaire.

The lad had no chance if the man chose to attack him, but that was not his goal at all. His only task here was to ensure that the woman came back to the village hidden in the mist with no problems at all. In a nut shell he was not to die and not to cause any casualties which seemed out of his area of expertise. That would not stop the greedy ninja from undertaking the mission and that he did. Now presented with the opporotunity he needed after traveling for days to get to the hidden leaf village without a paper trail the man was satisified. It would seem as if the Ninja Gods were smiling down at him with the presentation of such a gift as a young child to avoid any extra work than needed. There was only one unknown variable, an x factor it seemed. 

Taki had no idea who the lads father was and that in turn meant that he hadn't the slightest of ideas about the identity of the lover of the boy's mother, his target. Without that information missions such as these tended to get tricky no matter who or what was at stake whether it be a small amount or Ryo or a village's most kept secret. It was a matter of choice and since time was not on his side Taki decided that it would be best to grab the child now and that was what he attempted to do. Jumping at a sort of downward angle towards the small bundle of life there would have been the best route to take, but of course Taki chose the flashier route. In a display for figures that weren't palpable he jumped landing silently behind the child, his hands moving to grip.

The moment his feet touched the ground a tree a few meters behind him rustled just a little bit and out from a limb shot a wooden spike that pierced through the man that tried to capture the young boy. Had he then the wits about him that he has not the young Parthenopaeus would have realized it a clone from the lack of blood and surpluses of white smoke. The fact of the matter was that these things were all irrelevant to him as his full attention was already given to a small butterfly fluttering past him, it's wings nearly glowing in the sunlight. Taki, the real taki, was studying from a nearby branch for the source of the spike that impaled his shadow clone. The mere thought was appauling to him, but he cast his rage aside momentarilly to search for the cause of his newfound head pains.

He hated these headaches, but they would plauge him no longer as the man that Acheron had known as his papa beheaded the hunter ninja. The boy was too open here and his father knew it so that day he and the boy's mother came to an agreement to allow him to live and be raised under his grandfather under the alias of a son. The years past and the young Parthenopaeus remained duly ignorant of the deception that was cast over his life. It was a bit off to him that his father had white hairs while the fathers of the other children sported vigor and vitality, but things like questioning were beyond the young man. The joy of his enrollment in the hidden mist's academy was soon overshadowed by the sheer delight that his "parents" felt about his becoming a genin and choice to follow in his "father" and late "older brother's" footsteps in becoming a medical ninja. A year later and many mental scars later he became a chuunin and from there his story continues, but that is where my knowledge of the young Parthenopaeus and his past comes to an end. He is now the age of seventeen and flourishing in the mist village. 

Yawning the young shinobi grabbed the hilt of his blade bringing it back into it's place at his waist and in it's sheath, swinging it in the midst of said action to free teh blood of the elderly butler from it. The young mister Parthenopaeus as he had liked to call him had now caused an end to the older male's life and with that a solid and swift end to the bullshit that he was writing in that book of his. To dare say that Acheron was a part of the Senju clan was preposterous. He was what most liked to refer to as an Uchiha when in all honesty he was neither of the bickering and rivalsome clans. He was a Parthenopaeus blessed with the gift of the sharingan from the sage of six paths. 

The other titles meant nothing to the young shinobi. He was raised a Parthenopaeus and a medic who also specialized in taijutsu and that was that. His sword skills were above average and his killing of the man that he had met only once prior to his slaying had awoken Acheron's Mangekyou sharingan.

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PostSubject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron   Mon Jun 17, 2013 1:25 pm

Is this done

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PostSubject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron   Mon Jun 17, 2013 7:07 pm


  • There are no S-rank Shirotori spots available, check the Open Ranks thread.
  • Why does the description mention a leaf headband?
  • App says he's 21 but personality says 17
  • Liking both calamity and peace is contradictory.
  • Susanoo needs to be trained IC.
  • Wrong password, read the rules.

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PostSubject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron   Tue Jun 18, 2013 12:30 am

Removed Sus
Changed rank
Changed description
The age mix-up and contradiction in personality were both clearly addressed in my history.
Couldn't find the password thing in the rules.

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PostSubject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron   Tue Jun 18, 2013 12:41 am

Remove all the extras spaced from the app, as well as all the extra [*] signs. If you can't then I'll gladly do it for you sweetie. <3
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PostSubject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron   Tue Jun 18, 2013 4:11 am

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PostSubject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron   Tue Jun 18, 2013 4:19 am

  • A rank only has two elemental affinities.
  • Can only have two jutsu specialties
  • Personality still gives an age that contradicts the rest of the app.

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PostSubject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron   Tue Jun 18, 2013 5:20 am

Besides the first two points Arumi said (the third point can be overlooked unless another admin votes in her favor). I'll also like to add:
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Jutsu Name: Summoning Style Contract Disposal
Rank:B
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Range: Touch
Type:Fuuinjutsu
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The user of this seal sets it to wherever he touches the person or being's body. It pulls free any ties to that person or being to a summoning contract and dispurses marking that the contract has been broken for good.
This can only be a permanent contract break if it's a higher rank. Up the rank or make it so that it is permanent until the victim reforms the seal - as it is very possible.
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PostSubject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron   Tue Jun 18, 2013 7:06 am

Edits made that were to the standards of all put forth by all parties including the age of my character.
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PostSubject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron   Tue Jun 18, 2013 7:43 am

We've had a jutsu that could temporarily release a summon, and that was ranked D-S. A permanent break seems like it should at least be S rank if we allow it at all.

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PostSubject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron   Tue Jun 18, 2013 1:44 pm

No permo breaks

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PostSubject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron   Tue Jun 18, 2013 1:45 pm

Also up the age to 20

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PostSubject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron   Tue Jun 18, 2013 6:17 pm

Application status equals updated. Age changed and jutsu now only lasts one topic so ranked back down to B as no perma breaks in seals are allowed with a single jutsu. In other words, BUMP.
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PostSubject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron   Tue Jun 18, 2013 6:57 pm


  • Extremely large chakra pool needs a percent max is a 30 percent in crease and changed your flaws the last one on there isn't really a flaw as its hard to mask your presence unless it a special ability or multiple jutsu's so its not really a flaw in my opinion.

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PostSubject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron   Wed Jun 19, 2013 6:45 am

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