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Shugyoku Yakushin

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Age : 32
Village : Donzokogakure
Rank : Donkage

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PostSubject: Shugyoku Clan   Sat Jun 29, 2013 3:13 pm




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Clan Name: --- Shugyoku

Bloodline Name: Shugyoku

Bloodline Ability: Shoton

Location: Donzokogakure

Clan History: They branched, originally, from a Senju clan long ago. Having been born a mistake, one of the members, his great great grandfather, was the first to show a talent for a new chakra. He was able to mold it into crystal, and seeing his training as an abomination to the Senju name, they banished the man, but he did not give up. He took on a new name and started a family in Donzokogakure. Now, that family had flourished quite a bit, three generations down, and their power was near to being respected even in other villages. With the death of the last Laird, Yakushin, his eldest son, was made to overtake his position. This was some time before he was made Donkage, but it was the most important even in his life at the time. His first action was to open relations with the Koumori below them, and personally saw to it that contracts were made and their families were united.

Clan traits: Upon the creation of Yakushin's "night eyes", other members have strived to achieve them as well, but few have ever returned, and none have received the darkness's blessing. One girl, however, after a few months, did return totally blind. Luckily, the Shugyoku clan has close relations with the Koumori creatures that dwell in the depths of blackness, as Yakushin wanted to unite his two families.

Clan Weaknesses: They're relatively poor. Being one of the smallest clans in Donzokogakure, they dont have very much political power among the other clans. It's a good thing their leader is the Donkage, right?

Requirements: Must be born into it for the Kekkei Genkai, but marriage with a member of another clan is allowed.

Members
-Shugyoku, Mira: Mother Alive
-Shugyoku, Kanna: Younger Sistser Alive
-Shugyoku, Saruhana: Father and Former Laird Deceased
-Other members number at around 13, but 6 of those are married into the clan.

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D-RANK TECHNIQUES:
 

C-RANK TECHNIQUES:
 

B-RANK TECHNIQUES:
 

A-RANK TECHNIQUES:
 

S-RANK TECHNIQUES:
 




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Hirano Arumi
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PostSubject: Re: Shugyoku Clan   Sat Jun 29, 2013 5:35 pm

  • Remove the ---, that's just a placeholder.
  • Crystal Pentagonal Prison is way too much for a D rank. I'd say B or A.
  • In the show, Crimson Fruit could survive a hit from a bijuu. Again, way too much for D-rank.
  • Crystal Imprisonment Wave should be A or S.


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C: 3
B: 1
A: 0
S: 0

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Shugyoku Yakushin

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Rank : Donkage

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PostSubject: Re: Shugyoku Clan   Sat Jun 29, 2013 10:34 pm

I completely understand. I moved Crimson Fruit to B and Crystal Pentagonal Prison as well as Crystal Imprisonment Wave to A
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PostSubject: Re: Shugyoku Clan   Sat Jun 29, 2013 11:18 pm

Approved 1/2, though I would still recommend removing the --- from the jutsus.

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D: 2
C: 3
B: 1
A: 0
S: 0

Rank-up points: 13

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PostSubject: Re: Shugyoku Clan   Tue Jul 30, 2013 5:20 am

Approved 2/2
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